Reviews for A Winner is You Kyuubi
Hillarious Tragedy chapter 7 . 12/4/2008
That was crazy awesome. xD

I couldn't imagine Roku winning anyway, He isn't as freaking badass as Kyuubi.

What does a mall need 700 miles underground for, though. D: There can't be that many things to store.

Well, good job as always, I can't wait to read your next Fanfic! w
MoonIdiot chapter 7 . 11/23/2008

This was absolutely amazing! Reading both of the fights were so exciting, but scary at the same time...

I was happy, that you wrote Kyuubi the way he is. Merciless, blood thristy, ruthless... All the things that describe him. You didn't turn this into something smushy and all that.

The part in which the Avatar forgived Kyuubi was also great. It showed Kyuubis character too.

I'm just so amazed by this chapter! Probably the best fight scenes ever written...

Oh no... Kyuubi has broken free... The whole thought is blood chilling.
avatarjk137 chapter 7 . 11/22/2008
Wow. That was epic. Just... epic. Brilliant characterization all-around (with the possible exceptions of Death's cronies, who largely could have had more justice done to them, but I understand not having room in the chapter). Excellent action. Great mood, excellent horrific and dramatic tension. Great description, you've really improved in that regard. Grammar/spelling errors are seldom, and when present, are not glaring standout problems. Doesn't leave much storyline room for the chaos round, but that's alright. Brilliant.

And Alius (unless he's in a different time zone than me) is late. Not that I'd count that as an instant disqualification, but... it's a black mark in the round where it really matters, so that can't be bad for you. At any rate, we'll know soon enough who's the tournament winner!
Khellan Rafe chapter 7 . 11/21/2008
HAH! Yes! I love the freedom bit. Great work on your entries Angel, and I'm cheering for ya!
Shana the Short chapter 7 . 11/21/2008
Awesome ending!
MoonIdiot chapter 6 . 10/14/2008



This was GREAT! AWESOME! UNBELIEVEABLE! I LOVED it! Really, this chapter was so exciting, I couldn't stop reading the fight scene. You described it so well, and I could see them fighting (which might be why my room is in ruins at the moment). Whenever Kyuubi got fatally injured, I almost cried out, because I just didn't want him to lose.

The part where Kyuubi was lieing in the pool and 'dying' was my favorite part. I loved it!

Alius111 chapter 6 . 10/9/2008
You know, every time I read one of your entries, one word comes to mind . . .


Damn it, this is so much better than mine.

Apart from feeling bitter resentment -HaHa- I thought you did a fantastic job. You're right, Kyuubi really is your muse.

I dont't know about you, but I can't wait for the last round. I've been waiting patiently the entire tournament to fight your character, planning and writing all the way down the road. And No offense to the other contestants, but you were the only one who ever made me worry that I wasn't going to win. Up till our round I never thought for a moment I would lose. Call it good old fashioned Canadian arrogence or me just being an asshole. Whatever you like.

I'll be looking forward to the results after our round.

Good luck.

Kohaku Kawa chapter 6 . 10/4/2008
Khellan Rafe chapter 6 . 10/3/2008
Damn, that was good stuff. The intro I liked especially. It's always cool to see the (near) end of things before you read the why of it. Easy victory Angel, no kidding. Keep it up!
Aelsthla-Mental chapter 6 . 10/3/2008
BAHAHAHA what a fight, truly a match for the ages, i feel bad for Kabuto, although since a roar of four-tail Naruto sent him flying, it was realistic. Still, poor Kabuto...

Anyway, you did an awesome job. Kyuubi really is learning from this experience hey?
Hillarious Tragedy chapter 6 . 10/3/2008
I almost thought Orochimaru would win, when Kyuubi went crazy. xD

Oh yeah, I spotted a typo. :3 "Then he opened his maw and lunged." Maw doesn't sound like a word, but it could be a demon thing, right? O:

Update soon! : D
avatarjk137 chapter 6 . 10/3/2008
Awesome, awesome work. Everything was well-foreshadowed, there was great action with a solid mix of drama, humor and horror to accent it, your characterization is above and beyond (but both characters are from the same canon, so that's kind of expected). We're nearing the climax of the tournament, and it's thanks to chapters like this that I'm looking forward to it so much.
Hillarious Tragedy chapter 5 . 9/15/2008
Now Roku's there too? O:

But isn't he supposed to be, you know, dead?

Ah well, poor Kabuto. He's much too innocent, compared to Orochimaru and Kyuubi. xD

Update soon!
MoonIdiot chapter 5 . 9/15/2008
HM, Roku... I bet he and Kyuubi are going to fight :D Hehehe... can't wait for it... I'm also excited about Kyuubi's and Orochimaru's fight! He!
Aelsthla-Mental chapter 5 . 9/14/2008
Heh, this is getting sca-ry.

What will happen next I wonder. Let's hope they don't cause TOO much damage.
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