Reviews for Superman AS: After Smallville
MikeyP-BSc chapter 6 . 11/4/2016
I enjoyed the story, it was an entertaining read.

However, you seem to have several grammar issues (such as using "they" instead of "there" - see chapter 2; or ) and problems with your punctuation (missing/incorrect full stops, question/exclamation marks).

Overall, your stories are good, and I enjoy your ideas - it's just your actual writing skills seem to let you down. Might be a good idea to have someone read over your work before posting.
MewLover chapter 6 . 7/11/2014
I like this story and I think you did good with it.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/30/2013
George reeves, nice, the first live action Superman
JamesTKent chapter 6 . 7/28/2013
Nice melding of "Smallville" and the 1978 Superman movie.
Ainsley Haynes chapter 6 . 6/11/2009
Uh, I loved this story. I just wished there would be more good fanfictions like this one.
Jeremy Shane chapter 6 . 11/17/2008
good story
Jeremy Shane chapter 4 . 11/17/2008
good chapter
Jeremy Shane chapter 2 . 11/17/2008
good chapter
Tony-El chapter 6 . 4/23/2008
I'm looking forward to a sequel and very interested take on how Clark become the Clark Kent we know in the comics with the help of Chloe. Please keep writing.
thekiller00 chapter 6 . 4/21/2008
That was a great chapter. I am curious to see where this goes from here.
ColleenJoy chapter 6 . 4/21/2008
This story is fantastic and it just keeps getting better and better! Thanks for sharing it!
thekiller00 chapter 5 . 4/20/2008
That was a great chapter. I am curious to see what happens when Clark meets the league.
winthjo chapter 5 . 4/20/2008
Great going so far. Hope to see more soon.

John
SliferRed chapter 4 . 4/19/2008
Awesome chapter!
thekiller00 chapter 4 . 4/18/2008
WOW ! That was a really great chapter. I can't wait to see how you turn the interview into Smallville style.
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