|Reviews for A Father's Pride|
| NightRunner15 chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Great story, I love how you capture the character's persona in your words! Absolutely fantastic!
| Blayr chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
I love this fic! I think young tolten is so cute (so is older tolten)! Continue on my friend! ) *adds to favs*
| Eternal Tiet chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Wonderfully done. Honestly, Tolten was my least favorite character, but at the same time, he is one that has the most potential for growth. You have managed to do what any proficient writer should, make the reader relate to the character, especially one they might not have liked originally. That takes skill, you have an amazing talent.
I even felt seasick for awhile. ;)
| Ablissad chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
Young Tolten, such a cute though. (Of course I have to keep imagining him in that golden armor)
I'd like to see Tolten try and press every button on the Nautilus, Sed would get so incredibly mad. That'd make a funny story.
This was pretty sad, how Tolten's dad was all ashamed and stuff. And how his mom was sick. Poor Tolten could really use a big hug.