|Reviews for Equivalent|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Very good... Atobe acts like an alchemist.
| NDebN chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
hehehehe this one is funny, but somehow it needs a sequel XD although most one-shots need sequels in my eyes XD But Atobe does seem some what out of character(in the middle), although I don't really care, he's funny this way XD
Lol for Monkey King and the Princess of tennis XD
| Trumpet-Geek chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
D'aw, so cute! I didn't mean to stalk your fics, but I am in love with the way you write their personalities.
| Jonquina chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Want more .
| Apple Snapple chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Interesting concept. Equivalent, eh? XD
XD. It was a very nice oneshot!
| The Night Owl is Addicted chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Ooh~ Awin, these are just lovely~!
And I'm still amazed how you can create one shots like this in just a short amount of time. o_o
Anyway, I love these! _ My favorite would have to be the one with the Princess. XD
Sorry, I don't have that much to say that actually relates so something of a critique. XD
| Takethestairs chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Thought the fic was wonderful.
I thought the seperations, and definition/meanings thing was very creative. I liked it a lot.
The only thing you probably could improve would be transitioning.
The fic is kind of hard to follow like I didn't know where things started and where they ended (within a section).
| Chibisuke chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Awin~ I love your Atobe even more than the Atobe in general. XP *babbles random nonsense* And your ficlet fills in the empty, empty hole of Royal. XD So hugs to you for writing this and Zuta for challenging(?) you~ XP
| Dudly chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
'If somebody gives you something,' Atobe states before leaving, 'it is only fair to give something back of equal importance.'
Or something of greater importance, like, hm. Well, we both know a kiss on the cheek ain't good enough! D But your story was really nice and totally makes up for the lack of Royal.
Okay, I lied. I want more Royal. x_x
| Crysalice Bell chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
That was lovely! Cute! Awesome! Um.. Well, just plain really good!
| crassreine chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
I loved every single moment of it.