Reviews for Fire Pit Fiasco
Wait.What chapter 2 . 1/23/2013
WTF! THe beginning when they are having sex, goes wayyyyy to god damn fast! Rate 1-10 my rate: 4
fatima343 chapter 2 . 11/23/2011
i love it
Aboutime chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Love it! Wish there were more like it!
AnimeAddict4Life chapter 2 . 9/15/2010
okay i love
Mochi no Yume chapter 2 . 9/11/2010
I DEFINITELY LOVE THE FIRE PIT!

This is such a hot story!

Oliver is sooo adorable and Robbie Ray is really hot!

VERY NICE *claps*
Lambertxxx chapter 2 . 12/21/2009
Hot story. Keep the chapters cumming.
Chris chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
A good hot read, but the sex was rather rushed. An expanded version would be great.
Nick chapter 2 . 6/29/2009
Oh my god! This is so cute! You should write a Jackson/Oliver, or a threesome with Robbie, Jackson and Oliver...
Camille12345 chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Really good but the interesting moment was a bit too short ;)
IDontKnowWhatToMakeMyName chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
OMG that was amazing! :D keep writing more a Jake/Robby would be awesome! :D
MaRissa chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
That was...well it would have been hot if your grammar didnt suck and you didnt rush it.

(: keep trying
Ship Stethan chapter 2 . 6/20/2008
that was hotter then I expected. interesting
imarmed15 chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
really really good story have you thought about writing a sequel
smexi chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
one word: hot

I was totally rubbing myself :)
snubby chapter 2 . 4/15/2008
Awsome chapter, I totally love this
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