|Reviews for Paper Mario|
| Truth Questor chapter 4 . 5/8/2008
Nice to see Mario gaining more friends. The Koopa Bros battle should be exciting. Glad you're back; keep it up!
| The Great Mikey Weston chapter 4 . 5/7/2008
Hey after this maybe you should do Paper Mario 2 as well. That would be kinda cool. So anyway, going good so far! Plz hurry and update! THNX!
| Truth Questor chapter 3 . 4/17/2008
Well, Mario is setting off on his quest at last. I'm glad you're having inspiration from playing the game. Keep writing!
| Truth Questor chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
You're making me want to play this again... Such a great game!
| Truth Questor chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
"What is this thing broken?" asked Bowser.
HA, HA, HA! That was HILARIOUS! I'm going to keep reading this.
| Lugi2000 chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
It's good,but you're just retelling the story
I know you've already thoughtof this efore, but maybe you should incorperate a bit of your own ideas, maybe have ome cliffhangers? some people haven't played the game before, so it could work to your favor.
Maybe make the fights themselves into a chapter themselves, add more discriptions of te fight, transistins and that other stuff
and try to do it in paragraph form, script writing may be easy, but if you do it in paragraph, your potentail can ncrease tenfold.
Other than that it's a great start. Very funny. 8/10
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