Reviews for The Omen: an Ominous Love Story
The American Hedgehog chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
Eclipsestorm4 chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
After a while I stopped reading becuz u kept putting freakin' AN's every 2 sec. u shud stop that its distracting and reely annoying
Eclipsestorm4 chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
After a while I stopped reading becuz u kept putting freakin' AN's every 2 sec. u shud stop that its distracting and reely annoying
One percent chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Lol, that was increadibly funny! I loved everything, especially Rukia hitting someone (even tho he's not dead), the author notes and definitely the budget restriction! LoL
oneluckyduck Sponge Fan chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
!) Very Good.

2)You should have marked it as crack, though.

#)Unless I missed it...

$)Uh oh. Gotta check now...

%)Dun dun dun.

)Heh heh heh...


*)Seriously though, if you said this was AU Crack then I would have enjoyed it more. Yeah...

()Can you tell by this review that it was written at, like, 2:25 a.m., and then BY ACCIDENT I deleated all but the last "~" and the ".," so I needed to re-write it and then decided to write it as a list and then decided to do the "!)"'s becasue I put "!" Instead of "1"?



))So, in conclusion, funny story-I laughed out loud. At 2"whatever in the morning. Yeah. Good-Job!:P

It is now 2:22.

~ .,
Vi-Violence chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
i loved the part about ichigo eating the fake blood
Miki Vee chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
lmao (:
taoueriT chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Haha, I loved the image of Ichigo slowly licking the ketchup off the floor, that was really hilarious. Actually, so was the rest of this fic! Keep writing! (and keep up the insanity!)
Madi-san chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
WHAHAHAHA! Amazing, but I guess I'm not surprised. You must be a genius. There is no other way to explain how completely hilarious every one of you stories are.

Paul is the best!
cg2006 chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
in all honesty... i did not get it. T_T but i'm really dense anyway [though i still manage to get straight a's in school, so i really don't know wtf is up with me...].

...there were lots of author notes...

i thought about counting them, but i decided not to...

oh well. it was funny. i just..didnt really get most of it, so maybe i'll reread it later. ;
Coletterby chapter 1 . 4/15/2008

loved it
Jay95 chapter 1 . 4/14/2008

at first i was like, whats up with this thing?

because i couldnt understand anything but when i finally got to the middle i was laughing my ass off..the author notes are just too funny!

paul..i want a paul..

hes going to be my new favourite character in bleach..hehe..

one day, someones going to be like, "whose your favourite character in bleach?"

and then i would say, "paul.. :D"

then that persons expressions going to be "O.o?"

and i'll just be laughing..:P

i love this story!

judikickshiney chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Paul from Accounting.

I want a Paul.

I nearly wet myself laughing when I was reading.

The part about Rukia hitting Ganju? Ya, I almost asphyxiated myself. Saliva can be very dangerous.

You have inspired me to write a murder/comedy fic. I shall go do so.

I loved it. It was brilliance!

puts foot in mouth chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
You're just as psychotic as your name!

This was a lot of fun too read *whisper* is Paul real? Because last time I checked I was.

The author notes were hilarious, as was Ichigo licking the corn syrup from the floor.

Applause to you for producing this and surprising me once again. Keep up the random! :D
chica blanca chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
oh my goodness! i cant stop laughing...Paul...paul, i love paul! and the dead breaks! those damn lights...cant breath...laughing too hard...

(down to snickers) so...if you couldnt tell i thought it was simply surperb!

cya crazy and paul,