Reviews for Demons
Emotional Scorpio chapter 2 . 12/29/2009
I can't believe Edward Masen is alive! Why did he try killing Edward? Does he actually hate his own son?
Emotional Scorpio chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
This is like reading Stephenie Meyer's writing- good job!
mdf chapter 5 . 11/11/2009
gr8 chapter
mdf chapter 4 . 11/11/2009
carlisle is freaking me out too!
mdf chapter 3 . 11/11/2009
oh poor edward! really different story
mdf chapter 2 . 11/11/2009
like the story. whats happening to edward?
iammonkey1 chapter 15 . 8/7/2009
i loved it
serachanXatsuka chapter 15 . 7/23/2009
Story is good! You were able to finish the story in 15 chapters and still show the complexity of past demons...

I just hoped you gave an epilogue with description of their life after how many years you may like...

Well... Speaking of shameless story promotion... Hope you drop by and try my stories...
ChristineC23 chapter 6 . 7/4/2009
wow totally gripped by this i found it
AthenodoraHatesMe chapter 15 . 6/22/2009
This has GOT to be the BEST STORY EVER! I love how it goes from Edward being captured to Edward leaving to Jacob and Bella to Edward finding the little boy to Edward opening the orphanage to Edward coming back...its just WOW! Great work! I love it!
AthenodoraHatesMe chapter 4 . 6/18/2009
I love this story! 3 3 3
Bella Dazzles chapter 15 . 6/9/2009
aww...this was such a cute story! adorable...i even got misty eyed when bella first got to the house to see what edward had created...

there could be a sequel to this and i'd be first on the list to read it! :D
unknown profile chapter 15 . 4/13/2009
oh god when i was in the middle of this story i was having a huge urge to kick edward where the sun doesnt shine and kill him then bring him back to life and kick him again, i mean i get he had to go but GAH! he was a royal moron! i actually though that it would've been nice if bella had gone and traveled around the world instead of remaining there and waiting, I had to take a peek at the last part of this chapter to contain the tears a bit, the jacob thing was really hard and it stung whenever i though in EPOV but i also understood bella though when he told her about the imprint i really felt like decapitating him too, even though edward screwed it up too much when he left it was really awesome and nice what he did with all those kids and finally BxE got together and i couldnt be happier, that ending was amazing. it would've been interesting to know what will happen with elizabeth and riley though i guess they'll just grow up knowing their secret but still have a normal life.

this story was amazing (again...i'm running out of adjectives heh heh)i'll be checking out the other stories too and plz finish the ones that u have started, those have original, great plots and it would be a shame if those go to waste..

great job!

ElizaV chapter 14 . 3/3/2009
I just knew Jacob would imprint on Maria!
ElizaV chapter 12 . 3/3/2009
I loved this chapter!
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