Reviews for Ten Defining Moments
enzhe chapter 10 . 3/23/2010
I so enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for writing and posting. The last two chapters were my favorite-definitely had me giggling, and the positive emotions were every bit as powerful as any drama or angst in the story-and for me, at least, that's hard to do. I think it takes far greater skill to truly convey great joy than great suffering.

I also loved Sai's little cameo... heh. Poor, socially-clueless Sai. :)
HINASHIPPER chapter 8 . 3/18/2010
Ten Simple Rules for Dating My Daughter by Hyuuga Hiashi

Rule One: If you come up to gates of the Hyuuga estate and announce your presence you'd better be delivering an important message from the Hokage, because you're sure not picking anything up.

Rule Two: You do not touch my daughter in front of me. You may glance at her, so long as you do not peer at anything below her neck. If you cannot keep your eyes or hands off of my daughter's body, I will remove them.

Rule Three: I am aware that it is considered practical for boys of your age to remove their shirts when they have been training for hours on end. Presumably, this is to ensure that you do not overheat while you are training outdoors. Please don't take this as an insult but you and all of your friends are complete idiots. We do have air conditioned dojos and indoor training halls for a reason. Still, I want to be fair and open minded about this issue, so I propose this compromise: You may remove your shirts and tops whenever and wherever you want, and I will not object. However, in order to ensure that your pants do not, accidentally, come off during any time spent with my daughter, I will take my senbon and fasten your trousers securely in place to your waist.

Rule Four: I'm sure you've been told that in today's world, sex with the wrong kunoichi can kill you. Let me elaborate, when it comes to sex, my daughter is that kunoichi, and I will kill you.

Rule Five: It is usually understood that in order for us to get to know each other, we should talk about recent missions, politics, and other issues of the day. Please do not do this. The only information I require from you is an indication of when you expect to have my daughter safely back at my house, and the only word I need from you on this subject is "early."

Rule Six: I have no doubt you are a popular fellow, with many opportunities to date other girls. This is fine with me as long as it is okay with my daughter. Otherwise, once you have gone out with my little girl, you will continue to date no one but her until she is finished with you. If you make her cry, I will make you cry.

Rule Seven: As you stand in my front hallway, waiting for my daughter to appear, and more than an hour goes by, do not sigh and fidget. If you want to be on time for the movie, you should not be dating. My daughter is putting on her makeup, a process that can take longer than sculpting the Hokage Monument. Instead of just standing there, why don't you do something useful, like sweeping my floors?

Rule Eight: The following places are not appropriate for a date with my daughter: Places where there are beds, sofas, or anything softer than a wooden stool. Places where there are no parents, ninja patrols, or nuns within eyesight. Places where there is darkness. Places where there is dancing, holding hands, or happiness. Places where the ambient temperature is warm enough to induce my daughter to wear shorts, tank tops, midriff T-shirts, or anything other than overalls, a sweater, and a goose down parka - zipped up to her throat. Movies with a strong romantic or sexual theme are to be avoided; movies which feature chainsaws are okay. Chunin exam tournaments are okay. Morino Ibiki's interrogation chambers are better. (Speaking of which, Ibiki owes me a favor. Would you like me to make an appointment for you? It's no trouble.)

Rule Nine: Do not lie to me. I am a master of the Byakugan – that makes me a living lie detector. I can see every involuntary twitch, every breath, and each bead of sweat on your face. If I ask you where you are going and with whom, you have one chance to tell me the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth. I have an army of elite Byakugan users at my beck and call. Do not trifle with me.

Rule Ten: Be afraid. Be very afraid. It takes very little for me to mistake the sound of your steps coming up to my front gate for an enemy Cloud ninja sent here to steal the secrets of the Byakugan. You remember what happened to the last Cloud ninja who crossed me, don't you? Incidentally, I will be cleaning and polishing the family katana as I wait for you to bring my daughter home. As soon as you set one foot on my property you should submit yourself to a full body search by my guards, remove all hidden weapons from your person, and keep both hands in plain sight. Announce in a clear voice that you have brought my daughter home safely and early, then leave - there is no need for you to come inside. You may not see me, but rest assured. I see you.

ONCE AGAIN.. .god. nuff said. ne?
HINASHIPPER chapter 4 . 3/18/2010 words... .GOD!
lilika808 chapter 10 . 3/9/2010
This story was absolutely awesome, such amazing ending, full of warm emotion, I could't help grinning like an true idiot I am. Through all 10 stories you absolutely made me fall in love with your writing, I couldn't imagine more perfect and believeable way how these two could get together. I loved every second of this, thank you for writing something so beautiful and full of feeling.
Cerawitch chapter 10 . 3/1/2010
KYA! this is definitely one of my favourite naruhina fic! thank you for writing such a sweet story about the cutest couple in naruto. i absolutely adore this story, they're just so sweet! my favourite character would be non other than hinata's father, hiashi himself. i'm having way too much fun reading his reactions when he fund out about naruto and hinata. and the fight they had? priceless. i can't help but laugh aloud at the scene (and effectively annoyed my roommate at the same time. LOL). but what i like the most is when naruto received the 10 rules in dating hisahi's daughter. seriously, i keep on chuckling and giggling with every rule i read, my roommate felt the need to check what was it that had been amusing me for the past 10 minutes. i can't tell you how much i enjoyed reading it. thank you again for writing such a sweet story.

hope you'll write more great naruhina stories!\()/
AnimeRose93 chapter 10 . 2/10/2010
lol, omg i loved this story XD it made me cry (beginning) laugh my but off (esp concerning hiashi), i really enjoyed it..should have been doing apush...but it was worth it to laugh so much! in a good way. thanks for writing
Omegasaries chapter 10 . 2/7/2010
Beautiful ending

You go girl :D
Omegasaries chapter 8 . 2/7/2010
10 Simple rules

That is probably the best and most funny thing i have ever read. You have a talent girl :D

Keep writing Naruhina



yin-flames chapter 10 . 2/2/2010
i really liked this story it was funny and sweet at the same time. good work XD
Annabanana1127 chapter 10 . 1/30/2010
That was fantastic! I laughed, i cried, i cooed ["That is so cute!-baby scene, lol. I am such a girl. Obviously. D]. Great Job!
vanila-chan chapter 9 . 1/14/2010

idiot narutoXD

hes so oblivious

love this story~
Xenriel chapter 10 . 1/12/2010
Aw! (Notice how people always say that around babies.)

Again, this is a great fanfic. Maybe I'll read more. Until then... _
Xenriel chapter 9 . 1/12/2010
Yeah, it is a bit sad. But enjoyable somewhat. He wouldn't be Naruto otherwise. To see him learn something new about life for the first time... It's kind of humbling.
Xenriel chapter 8 . 1/12/2010
Oh, please. Given a choice between Naruto and the clan, of course she would hesitate. Very sweet.

Ah. So you were the one that wrote the Rules (modified) I read them elsewhere and nearly died of laughter.
Xenriel chapter 7 . 1/12/2010
Forget that he was OOC. This thing was funny as hell! 10 hours! 10 flaming hours just to get his blessing, with the first nine being him just trying to survive! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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