Reviews for Ten Defining Moments
MRBee chapter 9 . 9/2/2009
Dang Shawny, i've been waiting forever for an update

jeez, your just as bad as Wander (I'm only teasing of course :P)

but honestly i can't think of much words to describe this IMMENSELY adorable fic... oh i just did haha.

Aside the obvious little things like morning sickness and cravings, you touched on other things like Random Congratulations which i found hilarious. The last time i was around anyone pregnant was my Anti, but even then i wouldn't really understand the whole thing about it, but i'm sure seeing that you have a daughter, you'd know just as much as any other mother. Entertainment aside, this was also educational. I now know the importance of vitamins to a pregnant woman and the fact of sensitive breast, i'll save both of those for later for my future wifey.

and I don't see how someone can read this without smiling atleast once. I'm out at my school's public computer library looking like an idiot smiling and letting out a feint chuckle reading this lol.

well anyways, always a pleasant read. I know finding the time to write can be tough but please do keep your readers in touch. Hope to see more from you :)
Epidot chapter 9 . 9/2/2009
Guess my surprise to find an update by you, right after sending you the finished chapter 4 of my story by e-mail (and telling you not to worry about a lack of updates recently). This proves that I was right about what I wrote as well: When you do update, it is ALWAYS worth the wait.

I love the humor you put into this story, every chapter a little gem on it's own and the whole thing is pure gold. I mean, this is a story you can sitt down and just enjoy for what it is. You can laugh and 'Aw' over and over, and it leaves you happy when you are done reading. Pure, sweet and fluffy gold.

And yes, you really are that good a writer.
Hina the half heart chapter 9 . 9/2/2009
If you ask me this was defiantly worth the wait! o

Ah..how clueless you are Naruto!
Doctor Yami chapter 9 . 9/2/2009
"Wait... WHAT!"

Priceless, mi amigo. Priceless.
SekiryouYouji chapter 9 . 9/2/2009
: 3 aww thats a cute chapter. Haha that funny that naruto didnt know but kinda sad too. But it was good. Laters.
czgohan chapter 9 . 9/2/2009
Yosh, finally a new chapter to one of my favorite, cute and fluffy stories i ever read. very well written and very much in character, i can def see Naruto reacting that way, "what are you expecting?" classic.

kinda reminded me of one of my fics when Hinata told Naruto she was 'late' reaction being "late for what?"

olny one complaint...(sigh) olny one more defining moment left huh? sad to see this story is almost at it's end

oh well least we have 20 or so more 'kisses' to look forward to (another of my favs)

keep up the good work
mlkoolc86 chapter 9 . 9/2/2009
Welcome back! That was a funny update. Yea that part of the chapter I actually had to stop reading for a minute and just stare. I couldn't believe he said that and believed it too. But oh well that's Naruto for ya. Great chapter, look forward to the next one!
Quill of Molliemon chapter 9 . 9/2/2009
...I LOVE IT!

Deep-fried bananas, Sai's need for a new nickname, and "tiny socks" combine to form EPIC WIN!

Poor Naruto...

XD
UnguidedLight chapter 8 . 8/18/2009
wow this is so cool cant wait till the next chapter is up.
Anzer'ke chapter 8 . 8/6/2009
Yes sirree, I think you've nailed the protective father template.

Speaking of which can you imagine what he'd have done to one of those nobles.

That would make a fun Omake eh XD

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.
Darkangel665 chapter 8 . 7/3/2009
Hey since it's called ten defining moments and theres only eight so far will that mean that there will be two more chapters? Also love the ten rules thing it was very funny. I would also like to tell you that I like the chapter it took ten months very emotional like your writing style keep it up!
Sockjob chapter 8 . 6/11/2009
OMG! That story was so CUTE! Sadly i got to the eighth chapter and realize you hadn't updated since 2008 (which means this story is probably dead). But anyway it was really, really, cute! I wish my story contained this much cuteness!
imatwilightfan chapter 8 . 6/7/2009
hello! i really like how you made the development of naruhina's relationship though it looks like its skipped too many timelines it leaves nothing out of the story..it's really wonderful and every chapter leaves me saying "aw.."in the end..i'm about to check out your other stories..you are officially one of my favorite authors.._..i hope to read more of your stories of naruhina..when i read great naruhina stories, it makes me not regret ever being a naruhina fan..oh, and just a heads up in case u haven't heard or read, there's a great chance of naruhina being an official couple in the series since i read in the manga that hinata already confessed to naruto though not in the way most of the fanfics have depicted it..XD

take care always..

-"to love is truly wonderful but to be loved in return would mean so much more"-

ps: if it won't be too much to ask, can you add me as a contact in livejournal? yu can send me your account name and then i'll look for u or u can look for me and add me: "hina_3"..pretty please? i don't have any contacts there since i joined it..hope u consider it..
SekiryouYouji chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
I love this story. It was actully the first story i read for this website but i forgot the title so now im writing the review. I like that you made the father care about hinata because in the show they dont seem close. 10 points out of 10!
darkchocol8807 chapter 8 . 4/23/2009
I love your version of Hiashi! others make him so inhumanely unemotional!

I do hope u'll keep on updating!

DarkC
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