that was so sad but so beautiful. i especially love the scene with Kiba and Hinata. had me crying. i'm glad it ended well. and i love how their friends are watching out for them and making sure they stay happy together.

if i didn't have the apartment repair man fixing my closet wall in the next room right now, i'd be screaming like a fanatic fan girl after that last bit.

that rooled update soon

I didn't notice this one, but what a nice story. It fits in very well with One Small Step. Hiashi trying to kill Naruto is classic. It made me laugh so badly! And Ch.3 was inspired writing. Fan-fiction in general has a tough time expressing true emotion. To be able to describe something so terrible and so innocent so clearly and convincingly is truly a master's work. Can't wait for 8-10.

you should totally write a story about a drunk hiashi.

Wow. I'm really glad she told Naruto her feelings. Who knows what Naruto would have thought of Hinata if she waited any longer. Keep up the good work.

LMAO! Ten bottles of sake later... I love it when Hiashi is portrayed as an overbearing, protective father. Loved this chapter.

Very cute! Such an enjoyable fic. Can't wait to read the rest! :)

awesome! this is definatley one of my favorite fanfictions, along with One Small Step. keep updating please!

wow! i love this story! keep updating please!

O.k - nice work working in the '10' theme even though it was a bit of a stretch at times. The ten sake bottles is def. the funniest use of the theme. *giggle*

*snbickers* actually, I can see ANY version of Hiashi doing that to Naruto when he doesn't know they are engaged. Or, depending on how traditional he is, married.

sweet

very very cute

i love this story especialy the last chapter ha poor naruto almost got killed by hiashi for sleeping with hinata cant wait to read the next chapter this is definitely goin in my favorites