Nice job of taking Naruto from clueless to the shocking awareness that he could lose Hinata to the Nobleman. It was very creative. Cool resolution too...as Naruto wasted no time asking for her hand.

Great job! It was a very well written and appropriate scene...i like the way you did it.

Great ideas and chapter. This is so cute and just perfect for the way it could happen. It was cool the way that you used naruto's memory of the waterfall scene here.

Great first chapter...you are a talented author. I am reading all of your stories and this one has me excited. I am a longtime naruto (and hinata!)fan and read the manga and get the anime cds...but just bacame aware of the world of fanfics.

This is one of those rare fanfics that make my heart flutter for joy. I can't say anything decent that would make justice to this awesome fic, that I recall being one of the best NaruHina fics. Not too many of them have made me feel ANYTHING, but this... This made me so incredibly happy, that words cannot describe enough. This was my third time reading, and I still could feel the emotions like reading this for the first time. Not too many fics do that, to me at least.

Writing style was simple, beatiful and not too describing. Maybe this is concidered pretty short for a fic, but it is perfect like that. Anymore text would have been too much. Something about your writingstyle on this one made me incredibly happy, and I find myself coming back to this again and again. And that's something not everyone can accomplish.

~Sihiro

I would dearly love to come up with something clever like 'ten things to say about your fic' but at the moment I am a little less creative than I'd like. I'll just say that I found it quite enjoyable. I preferred 'One Small Step' but this one is good too. I think it's the time lapses that make this one a bit less emotionally fulfilling, but I'm not sure.

Spectacular job though.

I thought I'd reviewed "Ten Defining Moments" already, seeing that it is one of my favourites. I'm ashamed to say that I missed it somehow. I loved all the fluff in the story. It took us through most of the milestones of the relationship. I'm impressed that you wrapped it all up so well. It left me with a sense of completion. The story made me smile so many times as I read it. That alone, if nothing else, makes it a great story.

Thanks for writing the story and sharing it with all of us.

Oh, God, IT'S BEAUTIFUL!

I wish I had read this sooner!

Awesome, awesome, AWESOME!

you said this exploded in your face well thats what she said

OMG I love this. One of the best Naruhina stories evah!

OMG! Greatest, naruto and hinata story, I read so far! Just absolutly touching! The way it was written, and the fact that, you kept their characters the same, but more prononce! Naruto was so funny, and Hinata was so touching, made it just... AWESOME! I guess that's my opinion, and I am happy with it! Keep up the writing or something! :D

LIFE CHANGING STORY! ahha this was great. The ending was perfect.

"Call me dad" *passes out* lol

Awwwww!