|Reviews for Hope|
| Dimminished chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Wow, that was quite the conversation.
I love how Sam doesn't allow Deans grumpy comebacks to disuade him from asking the questions he's wrestling with.
I also love Deans steeled resolve... I think Sam really needs that.
Hearing what the brother's are up agaisnt makes me hope that the Angels that have appeared in season four are really Angels and might actually truly be on their side and lend a hand, but the jury is still out on that one, still, it'd be nice to see Sam and Dean get some help.
The weight on their shoulders has never been clearer to me and I have this terrific fic of yours for bringing to light exactly what they are dealing with... Amazing as always.
| NC Girl chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
This is one of those stories that I read a while ago and never got a chance to review. You did a great job keeping everyone "in character" here! The dialogue was darn-near perfect and the story, as a whole, was touching and, in places, very funny.
I think my favorite line was: “For the love of – why do you always do that? Just when I get comfortable and think it’s safe you decide you got one more thing.” That caught me off-guard and made me laugh out loud!
| LisaSaurusRex chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Once again, I loved it! I love how Sammy always asks questions. lol Great story! I love the conversations they have in the middle of the night. haha loved this!
| Dixie Dee chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Hey i just wanted you to know i loved it to bits! Parts of it made me laugh for ages you are really good a writing for Dean. I loved the whole idea of it :D Well done on a great piece of writing! x
| pandora jazz chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Computer on - obviously
Logged in - check
Loved this story - absolutely!
I wish we could have seen this moment at the end of that episode. I really didn't like how Ruby made her announcement and than left, like she was right - No! and Dean's plan was wrong.
"Sam, she's a demon, ok? Yeah, she helped us out - once - but that does not mean we trust her."
"The problem is this chick has you under some kind of spell...You don't think she has some kind her own agenda."
I know many people like Ruby, because she is 'helping' the brothers - but I wish we could hear Dean say those words. Did you notice how everyone was killed before the demons surrounded the police station? Their throats were slit. What is Ruby's favorite weapon and how have we seen her use it to kill?
I kinda don't mind hating Ruby (like we did with Meg - though I think that was a better actress, just went blank on her real name) if only Sam would quit following Ruby. (OK truthfully I could do with seeing less of her - because personally I thought she ruined a great episode)
I loved Dean's words to Sam, "Then you'll have to trust me and my faith, won't you."
I'm so tired of this deal, it has made for a lot of depressing moments this season.
How Kripke thinks he can redeem Bela after she has shot Sam,(she should have been gone after that incident anyway) 'towed the Impala, stolen the colt,'and had the brothers arrested by Henrickson, (who I actually liked by the end of this episode and now he's dead) I don't know and don't care. The brothers have lost to Bela everytime and made to look stupid. She needs to leave.
I agree with Sam's thoughts, '...that if the demons hadn't arrived then he'd have ended up in solitary somewhere, not even able to save his brother or see him again before he died...she'd crossed the line and there was no going back.'
I liked how you ended your story, '...as long as they did it together, then maybe they stood a chance after all...'
I loved your tag!
I'm sorry, I don't think I did a very good job of reviewing your story. I may have gotten carried away with my views on Ruby and Bela.
So I think I should just say thanks again for sharing your story with us and real quick tell you what strange moment happened while I was reading it. I like to listen to music when I'm online and the station had static so switched to another. The next two songs that were played..."Carry on My Wayward Son" and "Wheel in the Sky".
Until next time, thanks and take care.
| PatDolivera chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
Is it just me, or does anybody else think that these stories, and the imagination of this writer,deserve to be read by Kripke and hopefully turned into must be a job there for someone with this talent going someone can start the ball rolling.
| Brenny chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
*lol* i know this is an angsty one, but still, i had to smile the whole time, bout Dean's comments and the way Sam wouldn't let Dean sleep *g*
Hope you had a nice weekend and i'll try to catch you at the next one
*hugys* Your BP
| sylia91 chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Yes,yes, yes! This was what I needed the boys to discuss after Ruby dropped that horrible bombshell in their laps and took off! Dean was right and Ruby was not. Nancy and the others would have still died and the Winchesters would have crossed a line that could never be undone. Kudos! Sorely needed tag for what was otherwise an excellent episode.
| Sue Pokorny chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Perfect. That's exactly how I saw the whole situation. Very nicely stated and completely in character for both boys. I like the way you explained Sam's hesitation over Ruby's plan. That was hard to buy at the time and this is exactly what was going thru my head so it made sense. Nicely done!
| bhoney chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Yay, a new fic from you! *does a happy dance*
Great dialogue as usual. You do a great job of capturing the boys' voices. Loved this: “Whatever. Just remember you wake me up before there’s actual daylight and you won’t have to worry about Lilith or this coming war.” LOL
And this: "I never thought I’d hear myself say this but he was ok, once he stopped insisting we were homicidal psychopaths." Such a glowing endorsement...LOL Ah, Hendrickson, we're sorry to have lost you.
And especially this: “She’s not human, she’s the devil in disguise. If that bitch had had her way you and I would be on our way to a maximum security jail for the rest of our lives. So far she’s shot you, towed the Impala, stolen the Colt and now this. The woman has not one single redeeming quality, Sam. So yeah, I’m totally not gonna lose sleep when I smoke her ass and get the Colt back.” Oh, please, let it be so! ;)
Loved the ending! Great story, please write more soon. Hurry! LOL
| Thru Terry's Eyes chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
That was nice. I especially liked the last part.
| deanandhisimpala chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Oh my gosh I loved it! It was so sweet, and so well thought-out, and I absolutely LOVED the bits where Sam kept on talking to Dean just as he was getting comfortable... hilarious! I could just see that happening. Really well done! Loved it. :)
| alwaysateen chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
I love Dean's argument and support him all the way.
It was weird to see Sam accepting Ruby's plan with no question and doubt... He has too much belief in her.
And I'm sure that wussy for a demon would have left the area to not get vanquish and Lilith's too smart to get caught also.
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Beautifully done! I really liked it. I can so see them having this conversation.
| KatieLB chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
great job on this one... I can't wait for the new episode! cant wait!