Reviews for Winged
RavingReviewer chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
All I can say for this piece of art!
Kajskk chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
I loved it. It was really good the philosophy words about flying. Somehow I think they are true. At least when you compare real flying with wings to all other kind of levitation and flying. A lovely and short chapter about that
ShayeraElektra chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Humm...Interesting POV of how is flying with wings. Good!
Han dj chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Two of my most favorite characters in Jsutice league were Shayera and Wonderwoman. I used to like Superman and batman but they looked a bit weak in the JL series and Diana and Shayera caught my eyes. It was nice to read a Shayera POV wihtout being linked to green lantern...well...I'm a shoujoai-writer so that makes sense to me. Hehehehe, if'you'll give me permission, i'd like to write Diana's POV regarding the last episodes of JL, the one with betrayal...and with regards to Shayera's a continuation to this? well it'll be a two shot story. hehehehe. But if you could write one then the better, i think I like reading it than writing. hehehehe
Grendle1853 chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
Really nice. I guess she would have a different view of flying. And at least Wally is better at Chess than Clark ;)
Soului chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Oh, I get first review? This is absolutely amazing. I loved your implication that the rest of the league doesn't really know what it's like to fly because they don't have wings. I always think that flying, really flying with wings beating on either side, would be the coolest thing in the world. Thank you so much, you made my day. I especially have to commend you on some of your technical elements, you really evoked an emotional response and captivated your audience. The only concrit I can think of is your diction. The vocabulary you used was awesome, but the story would've been even better with just a tad more imagery and retorical device usage. I think some alliteration and personification would have been very appropriate for this piece. Or maybe some metaphors or something. Just something to think about to keep moving forward, make something amazing into something truly mindblowing. Thanks again, this was great.