Reviews for Cinderella
FireIceandPoison chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
I really like this. It's nice to see what Charlie had to say.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Oh my god, this actually made me cry! I'm literally just sat here like a blubbering mess - it was so beautiful and you captured the emotions spot on. A pleasure to read :) x
Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
I think your story is charming.
Haribo2012 chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
sooo sweet i love it x
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
This is such a beautiful story and well written. Thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
i love it..its so beautiful and the song lyrics fit perfectly into the story...good job
KAT chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Awesome completely awesome:)i loved it!
Twilightgirl1724 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
AWHHHHH! Soo sweet, Charlie dancing with Bella. This story was so sweet. Well written. You are a very goodw writer. Cant wait to read more from you.

Twigirl :)
Miss unknown chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
You must be tired of these -but this has absolutely touched my heart- thank you!
cinewardy chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
oh my.. this was so saaddddd :"( but truly so beautiful :) i like it!
LivingInALostGeneration chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Awwwww, I loved it! xxxxx
EmmGee16 chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Beautiful. Almost made me cry, and that song is one of my favorite songs, so fitting and sad, but I loved it. You are a very good writer.
CanTigerucks chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
I love this story so much.

It was short but so filled with emotion all at the same time and I loved that you remembered how they aren't comfortable with showing their feeling because most authors in twilight changed the personality of he character. This is so sad, I can't imagine how I would feel when I see my dad walking away knowing it was the last memory of him. This was beautifully written and I love the quote.
wizkiz chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Oh God! This is amazing. And I almost cry too (not the easiest thing for me to do)! It was just so beautiful. So emotional and very well-written. Love it...

Here is something you might like.


It's a twilight-sims vdo about life after breaking dawn.

An aspect of it is really similar to this story... just with different generation/character.
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