Reviews for Coils of the Snake
Guest chapter 2 . 4/2
I didn't want to believe the reviews but this did suck. Sorry man but it's not good. NOT A FLAMER
Zenkari chapter 52 . 10/13/2013
I laughed when i noticed in chapter 52 of coils of the snake , when Ishida asks Kukaku to marry him he says Ikaku instead of Kukaku
ob1292 chapter 9 . 7/5/2013
I thought Zabuza was a part of the Leaf since he helped out with Homura?
Guest chapter 14 . 6/26/2013
cool story bra
a fanfic reader chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
i like how in this fiction that mizuki is not mean and he is really nice
Guest chapter 7 . 7/13/2012
Oh god plus dbz crossover ? Kool
Since when did ichigo use kamehameha
Guest chapter 6 . 7/13/2012
Bleach maruto crossover? This gunna be interesting
ElementalMaster16 chapter 17 . 11/8/2011
this story is just a little less confusing than You're different.

i just have to say that i'm glad that your recent work is much, much better.
Urisen chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
I was going to give it a chance until I saw you were going to put Sasuke and Hinata together... Are you retarded?
mr.poop chapter 13 . 11/21/2010
this story sucks and you're making the story speed up without explaining whats up with everyone getting too strong that fast
Invader-Timetraveler12 chapter 6 . 8/18/2010
Is ichigo from... Bleach? xover?
AnAddictedReader chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
lol just so you know, you spelled villagers wrong xD
Cleardragonf chapter 3 . 4/30/2010
wow...random characters much? i like where it's going but seriously. i love it lol it's okies.
DisasterMaster445 chapter 34 . 2/27/2010
OK, I was right. It is getting better. Good Job!
DisasterMaster445 chapter 21 . 2/27/2010
dude, i'm sorry, but you fail at life. i'm gonna keep reading this to see if it gets better. good idea for the harem though. i like it. but you have too many characters.
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