|Reviews for Cause I've Seen, Twilight|
| teambellaedward chapter 5 . 8/16/2009
| teambellaedward chapter 4 . 8/16/2009
| teambellaedward chapter 3 . 8/16/2009
that was great :)
| teambellaedward chapter 2 . 8/16/2009
that was cool :)
| teambellaedward chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
That was a great first chapter :)
| Lovedninja chapter 8 . 8/6/2009
| Freckleforce01 chapter 7 . 7/6/2009
god this is such a freakin good story. One of the best i've seen in a while.
| e1r3mom chapter 7 . 3/21/2009
I like it but it hasnet been updated in forever!
| GreenandPurpleMonkeys chapter 7 . 3/10/2009
DAMN!You really need to update! If you don't I'll hunt you down and make you do it! I know where your profile is!
LOL. Just kidding!
But seriously! YOu NEED to update! This is one of favorites about them being switched,(and I've read alot).
| mellieforyellie chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
OKay, awesome first chap, but I have a feeling you aren't from Arizona... There isn't a Phoenix International—our main airport is Sky Harbor. ;) Sorry, I live in Phoenix (woo!) and so it's kinda funny when someone doesn't get something right, lol. Anyway, loved it. :D
| 0Warrior0Maiden0 chapter 7 . 1/29/2009
5 months? And I thought I was bad...
It's well written though, and I do totally understand the whole DRL thing, so evil. Umm, why did I start talking like Lauren? Why am I still doing it?
I liked the way Bella tricked him into her buying his lunch, I'm curious as to what her power is though, it seems like she can read his mind, but if it's a pure swap of positions, and it seems to be from the way Edward reads people, then why would Bella be able to read minds, she's just a shield isn't she?
I shall read on.
PS I liked the addition of Becca by the way, my sister's Rebecca, Becca for short, or a bunch of other names she's not fond of.
| disabled now chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Good job. Just spend more time editing and clearing out inconsistencies and grammar/spelling mistakes.
| babyspongy chapter 3 . 12/12/2008
love it! update!
| jingles4thestorm chapter 7 . 12/9/2008
I like how he flashed back during everything. I'm not terribly certain that Bella would be so forward, but that is how I see her. Identification with the main character can really warp peoples views on a story ]. What I wonder is if there is anything that you own? Or that you are anything. lol
Eagerly awaiting the next section! I like your story the best.
| jingles4thestorm chapter 2 . 12/9/2008
I liked it. A very sturdy chapter that got the basic info out that we all needed. Though I think Bella's eyes went from gold earlier in chapter to BLACK later on. Just thought you oughta know.