|Reviews for Dance with Me|
| Blissfully Disturbed chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Wow... that was really romantic but the thing is, I was thinking of something unique cause stuff like that usually happens. Next time, be more creative but nicely done.
| Ris Fallon chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
I thought the idea was kinda cute. There are just a few suggestions to make: One, you might want to invest in Microsoft Word. There were few spelling errors, fewer than most, but you might need to get the grammar check or have someone beta your work before posting it. Remember: the thoughts/dialect of separate characters receives its own line, much like a new paragraph introduces a new topic or idea. There are also a few instances of missing punctuation and such. But clean those up a little, and it'd be a wonderful write!
Keep thinking, keep writing :]
| TogetherAgain chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
that was very cute!