Reviews for A Temptation Noble and a Fascinated MistressSlave
SMILEFREAKS chapter 5 . 2/15/2009
Simply adorable! Its so cute. Update soon!
SarahiNia chapter 5 . 2/15/2009
I love it!

Wow, thats so cute what Naruto said.

I mean Im turning myself into a not NaruHina fan witch is really sad since I love the couple and its just so cute to read NaruHina in this!

Cant wait till Sasuke finds her its going to get epic

bet chapter 5 . 2/15/2009
Your grammar reads so disjointed. I like the premise of your stories but you are in dire need of a beta to make it flow properly.
midnightblue08 chapter 5 . 2/15/2009
please don't make hina itachi's mistress... she deserves much better.. maybe sasuke could rescue her hahahhaha i hope so...
Emmeline Creazil chapter 5 . 2/14/2009
i like it mucho
narutogurl chapter 3 . 1/27/2009
Omg! luv!
wolfgirl7124 chapter 4 . 11/9/2008
lolz i would so do he same thing wow great chappy! 3
Estheriana chapter 4 . 11/8/2008
this sure doesn't seem like the beginning of hinaita romance
KagomeMarie chapter 4 . 11/8/2008
Hinata can be a smart girl when she wants to be lol
SarahiNia chapter 4 . 11/8/2008
Lol, that was funny!

Poor Hinata from riches to rags!


But shes going to get it trouble!

Hope her prince charming comes to the rescue!

Meaning Naruto will come with foil paper wraped around him!


winterkaguya chapter 4 . 11/8/2008
poor hinata...will she ever get her memories back? and i really pity kisame, having to fulfill itachi's most ridicilous request and at the same time, handling his temper! hehehehehee...i love seeing kisame being bullied! and i wonder what about the rest of the uchiha family? won't they recognize hinata?

update soon!
Emmeline Creazil chapter 4 . 11/8/2008
cool cool

poor hinata

itachi is a maenie butt

midnightblue08 chapter 4 . 11/8/2008
why is he torturing hinata?
lonely- unwanted-girl chapter 4 . 11/7/2008
poor hinata... lols... nice story

looking forward to the next


cutexxlalaxx chapter 3 . 10/27/2008
nice! plz update soon
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