Reviews for A Temptation Noble and a Fascinated MistressSlave
wolfgirl7124 chapter 3 . 10/16/2008
oohh whats going to happen oohh i can't wait plz plz plz plz plz update!
SimplySinful21 chapter 3 . 10/13/2008
update this one! i want more, and could you make hinata have more fire? seriously, she would be the perfect match for itachi.
KagomeMarie chapter 3 . 10/10/2008
lonely- unwanted-girl chapter 3 . 10/10/2008
nice! hope you will update soon, love it
Emmeline Creazil chapter 3 . 10/10/2008
omg this was


winterkaguya chapter 3 . 10/9/2008 old is hinata in here now after the timeskip? and is sasuke going to make an appearance?

update soon!
SarahiNia chapter 3 . 10/9/2008
I love it, so cute. Cant weight till Naruto find out that Hinata is still alive. Thats kinda sad that her pearents die and that Itachi is going to 'claim' he as his when she has no memories...but thats why I love your story. UPDATE SOON!
Emmeline Creazil chapter 2 . 10/6/2008
oh wow



i like it its well writen

update ASAP!

thank you
midnightblue08 chapter 2 . 10/4/2008
so itachi is not the king? or he will usurped the throne becuase form my understnding of the prologue it seems itachi will be king right? thanks
KagomeMarie chapter 2 . 9/24/2008

Itachi is so OOC

But yeah

BlackWolf415 chapter 2 . 9/23/2008
im a bit confused with who the king, the master, and their sons are and where hinata stands right now... i hope u can explain in the next chap!

im a bit interested to see how this goes though!

update soon!
champylin chapter 2 . 9/22/2008
cool! There's gonna be a war! _
winterkaguya chapter 2 . 9/21/2008
hahhaha...poor kisame...i know i shouldn't be laughing at his misfortune, but itachi sounded more like sasuke...rather spoilt! i wonder how old are they in this fic? since kisame mentioned that itachi is pretty 'young'?

hm...i'm sure hiashi would not be too happy about this...and how about hinata? does she like naruto?

update soon ya!
SarahiNia chapter 2 . 9/21/2008
OMFG Cute that Naruto like Hinata and wants to marry her and even cuter...and kinda evil...that Itachi wants Kisame to steal Hinata he wants her bad...even if hes making Kisame do his dirty work...Poor Kisa (! UPDATE SOON!
SarahiNia chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Thats so KAWAII!
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