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Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
KiraK.chan chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Haha "u don't make friends with salad!" xD
ScarletRedLove chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
Nice! The descriptions and the story plot is nicely planned out, though there was some unexplained parts, like why Sasuke still went out with that girl when he clearly didn't like her.

Still, in overall, the story is super nice!
TheLavenderHippie chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Oh man, that was amazing! And some how if Naruto was rated R, I could definitely see this happening xD I've heard the song and it's sexy, I never made the connection between it and Memoirs of A Gheshia though, which was a great book and movie. They really are perfect together. All in all, this was an excellent idea for a oneshot, and well written. xoxo
killmeangel24 chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
dammmmmmmmmmm thats hot
CYRA1104 chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
I love it, un~~~ 3
kattylin chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
oh i love it! XD
Roxas-Chan-Chan chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
I must say, very good.
NARUTO RULZ chapter 1 . 8/19/2008

fuyukoigokoro chapter 1 . 7/29/2008

very very very nice



luved da song

it fit perfectly in da whole situation.

im hopin 2 see more of these great sasusaku actiony (if u kno wat i mean)

storis u kno!

honeycomb198 chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
i love this story also i listened to the song and it matched so well with the story
VampireYukari chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
cool. way cool. love it 100% xD ur one of my favvy authors of all time o.o
SakuandHinasisters4life chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
you should so have a sequel i really like this story.
iloveshika chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
soz for always reviewing you, must be annoyin but i can't help it, i don't know if you noticed but i'm kinda obsessed with Naruto...

anyway, you should do a sequel, it doesn't have a end ending, if you know what i mean

Onyx.met.Jade chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
okay i know for fuckin sure that "headstrong:by trapt" certainly does NOT go with this *sweatdrops*
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