Reviews for Cross The Line
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Will there be another chapter?

I want to read another in this series.
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Awesome. Great idea. Catch ya on the flip side.
DiamondOfTheMoon chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
great story and i hope you add more.
PinkRangerV chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
That's pretty cool! Grammar Nazi that I am, I still love the fic! Kim's so sweet to Kyle. Is it like a brother-sister thing?
JuseaPeterson chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
Interesting. I don't know how I feel about the whole green ranger being there and such.

I did like how you didn't make Kyle super powerful and Ivan beat him.

Kyle seems like an interesting character.
Ultimuus chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
nice work. it was easy to follow and a fun read. I would suggest using a spellchecker, but that's about it. Good job! :D
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
good chapter & more please
Delgado chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Very interesting idea. To be honest, I never really thought what would have happened in this situation, so it made this good reading and you wrote it out well.

I liked the detail in the fight too, and it would be interesting to see how Kyle became a Ranger if you decided to expand on this...

Btw, there's no 'e' in Aisha's name
Superspyder CJ chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Dude, that was awesome in so many ways! I could see that happening...

Nice job so far, BTW. I like how you described Kyle and Ivan's fight. And I'm glad to see that he's not out of the picture yet...

The only problem is that you spelled Aisha's name wrong. Other than that, it's good.

Keep it up,

PhinalPhantasy chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
This is an interesting start. What would be Kyle's origins though? And it seems he's stronger than the rest of the team if he could fight Ivan one on one.