|Reviews for No Dispute|
| kateg123 chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
How could anyone criticise this? It's so amazing! And I totally loved the ending, it was some nice humour added onto the angst
| ziggy.uk chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
Don't know who criticised you months ago over this story but whoever it is needs their head examining, it was awesome. So glad that you rethought your decision never to write again because this site needs you and your great fics. You write limp Sam to perfection but also keep him as a strong character, which is not easy to do, but you manage to nail it.
Poor Dean, his concern for Sam still coming out as anger although he really doesn't mean to, but Sammy keeping things from him hit a nerve. Loved how all his anger dissipated when he realised Sam thought he was a burden to him to be replaced by the brotherly concern he'd always had for his sibling.
Great ending Sam recovering and sleeping the day away giving Dean the opportunity to tuck into all the pancakes at breakfast! Typical of the elder Winchester and great to have them back to their usual banter!
“You’re like sleeping beauty – you know, without the ‘beauty’ part. Afraid you skipped breakfast,” Dean licked his lips. “M and Bobby made pancakes …remember when we were kids and he’d get up early and have a big stack waiting in the kitchen?”
“Yeah.” Sam smiled at the memory, suddenly noticing his hunger.
“You were asleep so I ate your share.” Dean grinned.
“Could’ve woken me.”
“Dude, it was pancakes.”
Great writing hon, hope you have another story in the pipeline as it always makes my day to see an alert in my inbox!
| skag trendy chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
I do love when the boys argue, followed by one of them getting into trouble for one reason or other.
And as always I love Dean's dialogue; he's such a boy!
Great sequel! Well done.
| Still Awesome2009 chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
I thought it was great, I liked when health issues are a little overdramatised. It makes things more interesting. Keep writing, do your thang, 'cause you are good at it.
| Annna92 chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
I really loved this story, and I can't understand that someone didn't! And you are too good to stop writing! Actually you're one of my favourites authors here. The story was all perfectly written.
I can't wait to read more stories from you!
| Enkidu07 chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
I loved it. So tense and so mad at Dean's hotheadedness, but that really is how he tends to handle emotion. Hot until reaching the breaking point and only then showing his soft underbelly - and only to Sam.
| vonnie836 chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
I'm glad you decided to post it, because it would be a loss if you wouldn't have. And about never writing again, that's crazy, you a to good of a writer to quit. This was so awesome. Love how Dean tried to apologize and how he again and again finds his temper run away with him. This is so realistic, you can't just turn yourself off all the time, even if you want to. All you can do is try. I also thought the banter in the end was great. Really liked it and hope their are more story's from you to come soon. Hugs, Vonnie
| Youngest Ones Rule chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
It's a lovely story. Thanks for posting it!
| Jessica chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
wow sam has an infection but what kind sam had was never mentioned this story was great
| katy chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
You're my favorite! Don't you dare even think about not posting ever again.. D
| ephiny63 chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
YAY! Well done Sweety
loved the story from start to finish, I am so, so glad that you decided to post this. Please don't let people's smallmindness and nonconstructive criticisms stop you from writing, I for one love what you write and the way you write, AND I am sure that I am not the only one.
So having said that and seeing that this is finished, umm when can we expect another story? No pressure or anything hehehe
big hugs Shelly
| Poaetpainter chapter 2 . 4/16/2008
| callitintheair chapter 2 . 4/16/2008
I'm so glad you didn't stop writing and also that you decided to post this fantastic story. Your a wonderful writer and don't let anyone lead you to think differently.
Great story, you did an awesome job and I hope to hear more from you soon.
Thanks for sharing,
| pinkphoenix1985 chapter 2 . 4/16/2008
| BlueEyedDemonLiz chapter 2 . 4/16/2008
Wonderful bit of limp Sam, I really enjoyed it seeing as it had everything which floats my boat : ) great job! Liz x