Reviews for The Gift
Alana-kittychan chapter 2 . 7/28/2015
Aw *sniffles* that was so sweet a little sad but it was so sweet I loved it I just about needle cried
Donna Noble chapter 2 . 1/6/2010
What a truly excellent piece; I simply loved this.


HellzCrusader chapter 2 . 11/10/2009
oh this is such a wonderfully written story n_n great job.
morph chapter 2 . 10/2/2008
This fic is beautiful. Very, very well done!
jigsaws231 chapter 2 . 7/22/2008
Beautifully written.
Daisydill chapter 2 . 5/28/2008
Very sweet and moving. Great job!
Bunnylass chapter 2 . 4/30/2008
Wow, that was fantastic...

The last line really pulled at me - "He doubted few, if any at all would ever even realize what his true greatest gift to them had been."

I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing (although reluctantly, lol.)

: )
Mobile Holmes chapter 2 . 4/16/2008
How totally & endearingly sweet!
Misao-CG chapter 2 . 4/15/2008
;-; Just two chapters? Two cute, adorable, heart squeezing chapters? NO FAIR! óOò ::curls in a ball:: ú.u but well..

My congratulation on this absolutely beautifull fic. This made me smile and melt into a puddle of tenderness. God, Girl, you did a really good work here.

Here, You deserve a cookie! n.n



PS: ::puppy eyes:: sequel perhaps?
optimus prime 007 chapter 2 . 4/15/2008
That was truly wonderful. Thanks.
MoonstarWorld chapter 2 . 4/15/2008
A very beautiful story. Heartfelt and truly moving. It was amazing to journey into the mind of Optimus and almost feel every feeling he had from time he brought the sparkling body to the Allspark, to his thoughts as the sparkling grows. You have real talent.