|Reviews for Unintentional|
| PorcelainDollxx chapter 9 . 1/6
I loved this story, I loved the relationship that Ken and Daisuke had at the beginning, their jokes were epic and hilarious, loved loved them.
Also, I don't think any of this was ooc, (Well maybe a small percentage of Daisuke, since he was totally after Hikari in the show, but you could totally tell he dropped going after her shortly after Ken came into the picture, so not even) and I think it was great. And TK was quickly a favourite of mine also. I loved everyone in this story.
great, great job on it. :)
| PhoenixRoseQueenToo chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
Gosh, I'd loved this story! I thought that there was a little bit of OOC-ish-ness, but not enough that it bothered me or anything, so that's kind of whatever. I had really liked how the four leaders (Tai, Matt, Davis, Ken) interacted in the beginning, they amused me _ Not to mention, Daisuke and Ken's jokes were rather hilarious! My favorite chapter, hands-down was the third one. I... clicked the LJ link. That was my first time reading... that... and I wasn't as creeped out by it as I initially thought I might be. Normally I'm okay with skipping the "juicy bits" when it comes to slash - okay, so normally I don't read slash at all, but I've been on a Daisuke/Ken kick for about a week now - but something just compelled me this time, and the creep factor was really actually nonexistent.
The last chapter did confuse me though because I thought that Davis had lost his phone and keys? Well, rather, he left them in his jacket which was stolen when the second-gen wanted the pair to make up. So how is he suddenly able to use keys, and where did he get his cell from? Inconsistency has always been an annoyance of mine and I have a talent for noticing these things... heh. Anyhoo, this story is in my favorites _
| Kaizen Kitty chapter 9 . 11/25/2013
Enjoyed your story. A lot. It was funny, and even if at times a little unrealistic (the kids drive cars and have personal bathrooms just like American teenagers/not very much like Japanese teenagers), (and the smut scene on your livejournal was pretty unrealistic - Daisuke suddenly having lotion laying around, simultaneous orgasms as well...). But certainly had its charm! Most importantly it made me laugh and the writing style was light, easy to follow, a good read.
| hikora chapter 9 . 8/18/2013
Yay! I love it. It's a great story. o
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/24/2013
This is a good FanFiction. I really liked reading it.
| Emma chapter 9 . 6/23/2013
Heh, your review says 69, heh.
| James chapter 9 . 6/23/2013
I liked this FanFiction.
I feel that this FanFiction is missing a epilogue but other then that, I think it's a good story.
| James chapter 8 . 6/23/2013
That's a fantastic chapter.
| James chapter 7 . 6/23/2013
That was really fun.
| James chapter 6 . 6/23/2013
What a fun chapter.
| James chapter 5 . 6/23/2013
A very enjoyable chapter.
| James chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
I like this one.
| James chapter 3 . 6/23/2013
I read your uncensored version of this chapter from clicking on the link on your profile. That was really good.
| James chapter 2 . 6/23/2013
That read was fun.
| James chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Taking a break from you other FanFiction "Driving me Crazy".
I enjoyed that chapter.