|Reviews for Clouds|
| Yano-Kun chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
i really like the image of of naruto and tamari as a cupple
i,ll tell you if i see any maruto temari pics
| J La Loba chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
This was sweet, i liked it!
na, not that i know of, but i can look for you. i let you know ifi find any thing.
| Sox766 chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
| Tama Saga chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
I see lots of short tales dedicated to an author's favorite pairing, and more than half of them you could replace the two characters with completely different ones and get essentially the same story.
This story does that, sorta...but only for Temari. Naruto-wise you can't replace him without changing a significant portion of the story. And even for Temari, you have to change an entire paragraph.
So I'd have to say you did an acceptable job.
As for the content, I can't quite make the connection between clouds and Temari. And also, I'd suggest using something other than kirei yuri because I really don't care how good your Japanese is.
But it's alright. Keep it up.