Reviews for Time's Treasure
Kyprioth chapter 46 . 2/27
Severus. Snape. Giggled...
...ERROR...
...DOES NOT COMPUTE...
...REBOOTING...
...PLEASE STAND BY...
I thought younger Severus was a little too... easy to deal with, but not by much, and it was young Severus so it wasn't that OC, plus I'm a sucker for time travel fixits...but giggles...and...non acerbicly social Severus... the OCness was kinda getting to me by the end...and was there any reason not to announce the time travel differences?, seeing as they were not cripplingly private...(Rita would have made a fortune filling in the details as something eerily similar to a bodice ripper...)...
...So what I'm getting at.. is that while nice Severus is possible... I thought it would look more like a strict teacher, with painfully dry wit, and a very rough, but not unkind way of encouraging students...(...instead of ...a Severus that seems to have gotten a degree in child psychology, gone from introvert to extrovert, and doesn't seem mad at Albus for being so entirely manipulative and not having just . .)
...Malfoy... was part of my original suspension of disbelief... so I can't really say you twisted him too badly.
May the muses favor you,
-Kip
~Post Script~ ...the children playing with the nose...in public...(and him not being sour about it) kinda made me cringe at the out of characterness
...though him being OC was kinda the point...
zaubernuss chapter 46 . 12/26/2016
Finally a new twist in those time-turner stories. I loved that you stuck with Severus' perspective all those years in waiting!
zaubernuss chapter 18 . 12/22/2016
I'm super glad you did it this way!
zaubernuss chapter 17 . 12/22/2016
Now I'm really curious to see how you're going to develop things along the familiar path, but differently!
Guest chapter 46 . 12/20/2016
Very beautifully done...very well thought through...excellent concept...charachters done brilliantly. ...amazing job done...
Allie chapter 46 . 11/20/2016
I know this story has been released quite a time ago, but I stumbled upon it just now and I just felt a very strong desire to give my opinion on it nonetheless. It's simply put, great! It was compelling, from the first till the last chapter and indeed, as you yourself remarked a few times, it did feel as though 25 years had passed. I just can't get enough of their -though non-existent in real life- relationship! So I'd say: keep on writing your marvelous stories. Wonderful work!
Guest chapter 46 . 10/7/2016
First, kudos to you for improving your writing as this fic went along. The writing felt a little clunky in the first couple of chapters, but was definitely better by the epilogue. Second, this is an interesting take on how the characters might have turned out, and I enjoyed the variation n
WickedlySweetSilence chapter 40 . 11/4/2015
HORCRUX
Shadowhunter02 chapter 29 . 10/5/2015
Ew! Ew! Ew! Ew! Ew! OMG! I knew that Sirius and Petunia was gonna eventually get together, you can just see the tension between them! But I didnt know or realise how hard and weird and disgusting and other words it is to just picture them together, let alone kiss! Just EEEWWWW! Bleh! Cannot explain how grossed out I am feeling right now! Cannot think! Mind has been destroyed and now scarred! Just NO!
wine witch chapter 46 . 10/2/2015
A wonderful, sweet and well written story I really enjoyed. Thank you so much.
bookworm661 chapter 46 . 9/28/2015
Absolutely love this story. I couldn't stop reading; from the first word to the last it was incredibly well written.
hisnhers chapter 46 . 9/20/2015
I loved, loved, loved this fic! It was perfect. -sigh- I'm rather sad it's over.

-his
Guest chapter 46 . 6/5/2015
Great story!
A true admirer chapter 21 . 5/17/2015
Well, this novel is just bloody brilliant! As are the other stories of yours... To be honest, I too, not unlike Hermione have a little chrush on Mr. Snape. ;) I love how you give insight in his feelings, ways of thinking, personality! I have read hundreds of HP fanfics, but yours are the firsr ones that I enjoy so much that I post a review!
Kimmily chapter 46 . 4/1/2015
This was a very sweet story. I enjoyed reading it a lot and it was a great idea. I was very glade to see that you hadn't skipped Severus's years but told everything from his point of view. although it did seem rather strung along without much in between, which wasn't bad, but could perhaps be improved, or not... I was very shocked when Severus died but was glade to see you intended o see him live. All in all this was a lovely story with a great ending and just some parts missing that are not worth mentioning.
Thank you for sharing your story,
Kimmily
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