|Reviews for Neither win nor loss|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
| StormSword97 chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
I'm late but I just found this fic it is good just the right amount of detail with a little extra description of the gardevpir made it more believable. I had read a fic that had a song I knee in it so I sang it and I sang this one in my head made it confusing but that is my fault. Again good job
| Ghost chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Yea! Gardevoir likers you and me I love gardevoir she is my favourite Pokemon and this was a good fanfic
| PokeMaster123 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
"What I mean is... you're really... hot"
A better word would've been "beautiful", 'gorgeous" or, hell, even "pretty". Hot just seems a little... I dunno. It's just not the word I'd choose for writing a Fanfiction that supposed to be romantic and loving. "Hot" is more of a word you'd use to describe a random babe on the street. Ya know?
Would've been nice to see Cameron play around with her clit a little before just diving right in; gotta build up to it, you see- women like to be treated slowly and sensually. But other than that, you did a pretty good job. I'm going to have to check out your other stuff too.
| Shiny Ho-oh chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I actually had to clean my keyboard, i was eating something while reading, don't judge me.
| The Perverted Overlord chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Hey man, it's nothing to be ashamed of, writing this, it's not disgusting or horrible, it's passionate and full of feeling and emotion. As billy collony once said, "humans don't f*ck, they make love" and there's nothing disgusting about love. If you hate eroticas so much, just don't do it but in my opinion, this coming from one lemon writer (I.e myself), it's really great and you great potential.
| Superfam chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
I agree with MKstanly that was the best gardevoir fanfic i every read i loved it u should definatly make more the details were great tho only problem was that u didint make another chapter plz do it
| OechsnerC chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
awesome story please update soon!
| gooooooooop chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
uh, didnt read most of it. just read up until lemon part. was ignorent. sorry. was looking for a decent non- lemon fic about my beloved gardevoir, so... no, ima not a furry, i just grew attached to her like family. dont judge me. im looking elsewhere... please, people dont need to write lemons. you no like, you no try. bad grammar and punctuation as well as capitalization was intended in this review.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Do one with the new black and white
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
You should write a whole story of this. Maybe 8 chapters haha.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
well... um.. seems ledgit
| I'm My Own OC chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
wow. one of the best humanxpokemon fics i've ever read :)
| MKStanley chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Anyways yeah that was pretty much super awesome. Yes, Gardevoir is the best; yes, you did an excellent job on your first lemon; yes beat (in this case) is spelled beet; no, there was nothing bad about this (worth mentioning)
You sir are good to go. Write more.
P.S. Yes that was a Quake reference.
| Kyosouta chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
wow. I'm not that big fan of lemons, but wow! this is really good. Hey, i was wonderin if you like naruto at all, you should check my fanfic; Burning Blue. Man! what a good lemon! xD