Reviews for Allusions
Limxuxu09 chapter 4 . 6/18/2010
I just started to read this fic though I'm more of a "one shot" reader lolz! I just had to read this because you're such an amazing writer on what I've seen to your other works! :D

I haven't seen any OOC yet actually. I totally LOL-ed when Ryohei and Gokudera were arguing on Part 1, it was so fun to read! You were able to capture them perfectly even the part between Haru and Yamamoto on Part 2. And what does "drowning in the sea" means? LOL I have an idea but i'm not sure if we're on the same wavelength xD
thelovelyvengeance chapter 4 . 8/16/2009
I know I said this already in the last two chapters but I just love the humor in this story xD It's something you don't see in every story.

“Kyoko-chan!” Haru suddenly burst into tears and threw herself on the startled girl. “It’s the sea,” she wailed, “Haru is drowning in the sea!”

Even though it was supposed to be sad, I couldn't help but smile and laugh at that little bit. I also love the YamaHaru in this. The part where Yamamoto gets mad isn't OOC. I think it's part of his personality. So don't you worry a bit! :D
thelovelyvengeance chapter 3 . 8/16/2009
I think my gut busted from laughin so much xD The styrofoam was genius! I would've never thought of it! Haru is quite scary too O.o

The YamaHaru scene was cute and they weren't OOC at all! So no worries! :D
thelovelyvengeance chapter 2 . 8/16/2009
I love how you write, you have great humor and you seem to know the characters very well :) Falalala, I wonder how this will work out? xD
NananaYeahyeahyeah chapter 4 . 7/21/2009
The stories really nice I like to read more :)
kimikissu07 chapter 4 . 6/11/2009
So simple, yet, amazing story. I hope for more YamaHaru scenes. So far, the story is good, not much OOC-ness. Added to favorites, waiting for next chapter. _
dragonlayer chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
That's probably the 6th time I've read this fic. It's really addicting. This time though I decided to leave a review. Just to tell you how great the fic is. I hope you update it.
doodle-chan chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Yay a multi-fic YamaHaru! I'm very happy super happy XD I hope you continue writing this.
love8086 chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
aww pleaze dont stop makin this great story! its wonderful..i cant wait for the next chapter
Committee Co-Chair chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Bring on the chapters!
N. Mandy chapter 4 . 1/21/2009
This is so KAWAI!

Poor Haru... they don't trust her T-T...xD

Kissus ;*
Sweet Scrifice chapter 4 . 1/5/2009
No cliffhanger! This is getting really good! I love how you put humor and drama at the dame time. Haru, Yamamoto and the others are all in character! Please update! I realy want to find what happens next!
Kur0shiro chapter 4 . 12/29/2008
klasjalskdalksd! Dude, I think I love you :D I like how it isn't so fluffy yet definitely not lacking in terms of sweetness :3 Can't wait for the next updates!
doorahh chapter 3 . 11/20/2008
I love the gang scene...I can just imagine Haru snuggling closer to yamamoto!
aprilmoonC chapter 4 . 11/9/2008
omg! dis fic is so good... pls. update soon
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