Reviews for Firestorm
Blue Tulips chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
I definitely didn't see that coming! At first I thought-oh red eyes, that must mean that Bella is still a newborn. But then I remembered that it was set during Twilight. And then Victoria said: James. It took me a couple of seconds to realize who said that. ;D

I bet that happened to a lot of other readers!
sammy55 chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Wow. Totally shocking ending. I had no clue who the heck you were writing about until the end! Amazing!
coke.pepsi.sprite chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Wow. Beautiful. So much passion and love. Excellent work!
Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
This was a great story from James prespective about Victoria.
CC244 chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
I didn't expect it to be James and Victoria. It's nice to see them portrayed as something other than villans. :)
signedsecret chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
that was genious! i would have NEVER thought it was victoria/james! i thought it was bella/edward
bellaedward8142 chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
okai u have so got to mention the fact that this is a vxj oneshot insted of letting us think it was a bxe

at least mention in your summary
wolverinacullen chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
AW! I loved this, I could really picture them being romantic together just like this, more or less at times too, but just like this. Awsome job!
RiverGold chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Wow, I totally missed the point of that one. All that firy hair and everything, and I still thought it was some kind of post breaking dawn Bella/Edward. I feel slow. Heh. Then I got to the "James" bit and I was all like, wait, what? Lol. Very good though. Even though I'm reading this while baking cookies with my little sister, so it's kinda awkward...

I love your stories.
DragonWinged chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
amazingly written
Words-To-Choke-Upon chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
LOL you know that I didn't know that it was about James and Victoria until the word James came up in the end? I was completely oblivious!
uptonmama chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
ew James and victoria? very well written.
The Real Blue Eyed Demon chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
OMG, I've never seen a James/Victoria fic but I loved this.
Trikky-Stikky chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
im confused... y did she say james?
gotbooks93 chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Wow. Didn't see that one comming. Bravo
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