|Reviews for DOWN SYNDROME, a Kim Possible Fanfic|
| KPFAN3617 chapter 6 . 5/29/2013
This story is one of the best I ever read. Very well written I might had. I loved how you made mrs. Possible say " you owe me two grandchildren for this" lol overall I very great story.
| Tootsie chapter 7 . 12/19/2012
Nice, but why is it called Down Syndrome? What does it have to do with Down's Syndrome?
| The Grinning Psychopath chapter 2 . 11/19/2010
great chapter.. my condolences for your losses. or at least as many as i can offer, seeing as the closest i've gotten to real grief, has been when my characters on tv shows or books have died. heh...
though my uncle did die, a few months ago... but i was really more happy, than i was grief struck about that, lol... oh i really did not like that man...
got a question, are you british? if so how many of you people are on here, every author i've encountered on here, seems to be either british or australian... you'd think since the person who put up this thing was asian, that the majority of people on here would be asian, wouldn't you?
anyway again i say, great work, hope next chapter is just as good.
| The Grinning Psychopath chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
hmm what to say... i'm sorta depressed at the moment, which is why i'm reading this... i know that doesn't make much sense, but hey alcohol is a depressant, and an astounding number of people still drink it, particularly people who are depressed... well this is like that.. except its words, instead of booze.
anyway, lookin good so far.. keep it up.
| Sentinel103 chapter 7 . 7/29/2008
Just having read this story again, I think all of us realise how easy it is to lose someone we love. Kim is lucky she gets a second chance with her Ron. Hope she doesn't waste it.
larry (Sentinel 103)
| ErnestTheGuy chapter 7 . 7/11/2008
this story is writing incredibly well. incredibly convincing and is one of the few stories that i have cried while reading. wonderfully done and i love your work.
| Shadow user Shu chapter 7 . 4/22/2008
Wow this was a great fanfic, i love how you tied everything together at the end. Hope you keep on writing more!
| Pojko chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
That was a beautiful ending to a good story. Great job!
| kaiokken chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
Thanks again to everyone for the wonderful reviews... and also on my improvement. I still though have much to learn.
Didn't realise I had more alerts as my Yahoo mail blocked the fanfiction bot, so I missed any alerts/ PM's. So if I haven't replied, it was for that reason.
Anyway, till then, I'm gonna do some readin and enjoy the 'Kimmunity'
| CajunBear73 chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
Tied things up here. Ron's got his health back, but there was still the issue of him and Kim being separated by her schooling.
Glad he's going back with her and a new/old job is waiting for him there.
They do balance each other.
| screaming phoenix chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
A sweet ending and pretty much in character all the way around.
Thanks for the tale.
| Samurai Crunchbird chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
I just finished reading this chapter and three things are going through my mind...
First, this was a 'wham-bam' ending, with everything falling into place at the last bit...yet, it was not rushed. Points for that, my friend.
Second, I am beginning to believe Wade *does* have the whole world wired! He must have broken up more kisses than a prom chaperone.
Third...and I blame myself for this one...is the rating. I know it may not mean as much, now that the story is completed. Still, I really believe alcohol abuse, deep mental illness, and a suicide attempt do not fit the 'K' rating you gave this tale. May I suggest a 'T' rating for this, or at least 'K-Plus'?
Congratulations, once again, on another fine story. Indeed, you are progressing quickly...and have come a long way from your first submission.
Your friend in writing,
The Samurai Crunchbird
| James MacPherson chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
A happy ending indeed. Ron gets his job back and is gonig with Kim.
And Wade sure knows how to ruin a good moment.
Ron and the Inkblob is something I won't be surprised about, him just seeing Bueno Nacho. Amusing.
Good ending. Everyone is down better then I've been able to.
Sacred White Phoenix
| Kwebs chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
Great ending to a great story. Keep it up. You really seem to have Kim and Ron down.
| screaming phoenix chapter 6 . 4/20/2008
Wow,what can I say? First,I'm sorry for your loss.I just found this story and it's my first reading of have handeled the subject matter with great compassion. It was an honor to read it and I hope you have had better days lately.