|Reviews for Rationality and Romance|
| FPJ's Mom chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
You are doing a fabulous job with this story, and I look forward to reading more.
I am so impressed by how well you write in English - it is so difficult! Most of the errors I am seeing are not spelling, but really word tense and translation oddities of English...you might consider getting a Beta Reader to help point these out in the future so they don't distract your readers from your lovely stuff!
BTW, I've never thought about rain "smashing" against a window, but I kind of like the imagery! ;)
| Kayl Lebeau chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Hi, I think its a great idea and would love to read more!