Reviews for Prime's Number
SweetSpark22 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Haha, this chick is like the opposite of me around boys. I mean, I'm not timid or anything like that, but I could never be this ridiculously bold. I like her. She'll be fun to read, I can just tell.
sonadow56 chapter 4 . 12/5/2009
great story
yiggersentia chapter 29 . 8/15/2008
Oh! Ohohohohohohoh!

Oh LOVELY! Oh so LOVELY! Even MY plot bunnies love it!

(wiggles in delight and utter happiness!)


(scoots Optimus over to you as he looks around confused)

There you go! There's a start!


*poke*(reaches over and pokes Starscream to make him thrash a bit more for you)


(picks up a rather worrisome plot bunny and tosses onto Starscreams fender to watch the glitter)


Ha! What's in their looks to make Bee start to back away?
yiggersentia chapter 28 . 8/14/2008

Can't...breath! Rolling... on... floor... in... pain... from... laughing... ass... off!


Oh! I love how you wrote Ratchet!

yiggersentia chapter 27 . 8/12/2008


Uh oh. What 007 said... B( Darn! Guess to need a little more.B)



optimus prime 007 chapter 27 . 8/11/2008
LOL! That was funny. But you need two more chapters! 27 is not a prime number. 29 is. :)

fallenfaeangel chapter 26 . 8/11/2008
Awesome! I hope you write more with your great writting style! I love the ending! You really can spin a good story. Maybe you can do another story with that style...maybe Ironhide x OC. He amuses me! Or Your writting is great and I can't wait to see future work!
yiggersentia chapter 26 . 8/10/2008









YIKES! When you want to end something, you just END it, don't you! Just,"Hm... I'll think I'll stop it right... HERE!" and WHUMP! Off with it's head!


Or I gues you can say you just circumcised it...

Whichever visual works for you...

ANYWAY, You 'fleshed it out' beautifully, by the way. Thinking back, I really like the immediate action/reaction scenes going on. I think it really worked well with Opti's POV. Hm... does that mean Hatc... I mean Ratchet's POV will make the storyline be twisty-er and more convoluted?


M... Ratchet's aft... m...


Oh! Wait! Where was I? Sorry. Got distracted...(blushes)

Uh... yes! Very good story! Can't wait for the next! (runs away to reread)
yiggersentia chapter 25 . 8/3/2008
The DREAM! Awesome! The mockery! I LOVE it!

And then...



I think my heart broke...




MORE! (please?)
optimus prime 007 chapter 24 . 7/28/2008
Ah, I see you like to torture Optimus as much as I do. Yes, I do both the physical and emotional torture to him. Can't help it.

Anyway, nice update. Hope the next chapter doesn't take as long. Want to know what happens when Optimus wakes up. :)

DemonicSymphony chapter 23 . 7/17/2008

Must have MORE. This fic is just frealling MADE of win
Silver chapter 23 . 7/14/2008
I am in love with your story. Every time I read a newly posted chapter I rush to read it. _

The suspense is astounding.

Can't wait to see what happens next!
optimus prime 007 chapter 23 . 7/14/2008
Hope nothing too bad happens to Reggie. Optimus would never forgive himself if his son was hurt badly by the core.
yiggersentia chapter 23 . 7/14/2008
You're starting on 24 now, right? Rightrightrightrightright?

(Does best Frenzy imitation)

(Downs the last of a doubleshot of expresso straight up)

(Opens a can of coke-drinks-tosses empty shell over shoulder)


"Finally! A view!

Of Ratchet’s rear. Blast it. That wasn’t helping."

Whoo HOO! Ratchet's rear!

Well I, for one, think it helps a CONSIDERABLE amount! More! 24? Moremoremoremoremore! Plee...eeze?
fallenfaeangel chapter 22 . 7/5/2008
Another great chapter! I can't wait to see what will happen next! Will Mercedes be okay? Will she encounter her father and have to deal with him? Will Opty allow others to help him? I can't wait to read more and find out what will happen! Please continue your splendid story!
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