|Reviews for A Prayer and the Matrix: Ironhide's Return|
| CindyB chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
Sweet. I really love Ironhide stories that involve the Lennox family. I especially love the him with little Annabelle. I can't wait to read more.
| AMAPADME chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
ok so this is a good idea for a story. I laughed at how Annabelle would draw on Ironhide. Not being in the war made him soft.
While I liked the idea of the story I have to say you are very choppy in getting form one place to the other. For example Ironhide is tracking a homing beacon. When did that come up? how far from the Lennox house was it and why did he divert was he told to divert and bring in the new guy? Then Hot Rod comes from the pod and suddenly Bumblebee is talking to Ironhide and we don't know who was in the pod but apparently Ironhide had a whole conversation with Annabelle about who he was and that he was ok.
I really want to see more of this story because I like stories with this kind of plot line. I am also writing a story where Bumblebee is in charge of Sam's daughter.(my creation.) Just try working on this area.