Reviews for Camarilla
BabyYoureMyOxygen chapter 9 . 1/16/2014
I like this story. Edward is a little OC, but that's what makes it interesting!
twilover 16 chapter 12 . 5/8/2013
this was sooooooo beautuful it make me cry at the end
you did a very great job camarilla
Motherof8 chapter 12 . 4/3/2013
Great story. Liked the sweet ending. Thanks for writing it
Guest chapter 12 . 6/29/2012
white more pleas
Topaz18 chapter 12 . 2/4/2012
AWWWW! Beautiful story!
theshadowofyoursmile chapter 12 . 1/24/2012
hello

uhm, happy birthday... wow this is awkward XDD but anyways I read your story I liked it, a carefree Edward for a change instead of the brooding man. Now you're what? 22, he hehe I turned 22 last December 15, anyways I'm gah I do like your story although you haven't updated and I believe the chapter ended with a good closure, life for the summer time.

I got like two things to tell ya like critic? gah, anyways the thing is that you changed the person you where writting as, don't know how to put it in English... uhm you changed the perspective of the narration, you jumped from Bella talking to He put her on the Jeep... it was a woah, uhm the Jeep started white as in the movie and now is white and uhm some typos and stuff but in general I love the story please don't shoot me, the last person who I got the stupid idea to tell them that they had some errors took it the wrong way and the woman replied pretty awfully, I still finished reading her story cause I liked it, still do.

-Ana

P.S. again happy birthday
theshadowofyoursmile chapter 2 . 1/23/2012
I fail very much cause I didn't read the authors note, I'm so sorry darn it
theshadowofyoursmile chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
Hello, I'm Ana and I should have read this story before I kind of like it and it's the first chapter that I have caught uhm and it makes me remember a book I read a while ago named "This Lullaby" by Sarah Dessen, I liked it very much, the skepticism and the lunacy I might have imagined more than what the book gave anyways but this has like the same wave

anyways goodnight

-Ana
KaylaDuhh chapter 12 . 6/7/2011
Please finish amazing
CynicalDreamerC chapter 12 . 3/12/2011
Aw. :')
CynicalDreamerC chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Haha. I love persistent Edward! :')
Skrye chapter 12 . 1/18/2011
Just revisiting my favorite story! It's great the way you've characterized them so playfully. Maybe we could get an update at the one year mark coming up, we'd love you (more) forever!
jus2read chapter 12 . 1/5/2011
Aaaawwww, datsss sooo sweettt ))))

Update sooonnn

xxx
LivingInALostGeneration chapter 12 . 10/2/2010
i've really enjoyed reading this so far and i can't wait for the next update. xxx
Blaura chapter 12 . 9/9/2010
um hello. I am just a stranger who you do not know, and who absolutely do not live in the room next to yours.

I Believe that you need to update this story very soon.

I am ever so disappointed and want to read onward.
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