Reviews for The King and His Prince
cl.ryuzaki.3 chapter 4 . 12/28/2013
What kind of ending is this?!
And what the heck is that diaper thing?!
NEKO.NEKO.KYUUN chapter 4 . 5/22/2012
... you could have at least ended it with sakuno and ryoma being married... that would give the ending a positive side at least... ryoma deserves to be happy! (and i hope saying that i would have preferred ryoma being married to sakuno doesn't earn me a few enemies! i also don't like ryoma being ended up with a girl! i just like happy endings! SPARE ME FROM THE WRATH OF FANGIRLS!)

and atobe you coughsexycoughhotcough bastard! how could you cheat on ryoma! PREPARE TO SUFFER THE EVERLASTING WRATH OF THE RYOMA FANGIRLS!
kuroikuu chapter 4 . 3/12/2012
what, What...

WHAT THE HELL DID I JUST READ?

My mind cannot grasp /whateverthisis/ It's so sick and, and... and so many things I don't want to name.

Yet, yet I couldn't stop reading it. Its a little shocking. X
Fujoshi-dono chapter 4 . 3/6/2012
I liked it okay

MAANNNN

HOW I WISH FOR ATOBE TO BE EVEN MORE HEART BROKEN

HOW COULD HE DO THAT TO RYOMA
PANDORA VANITY chapter 4 . 6/19/2011
NOOOOOOOOOO...! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO THE PRINCE! ANYWAY, THAT WAS SHOCKING.
Nimfah chapter 4 . 6/30/2010
I really liked the story but the ending was too much I think. Too dramatic in my oppinion.
xCallista chapter 4 . 5/13/2010
Gawd this is sick. o.O

The ending is seriously unexpected, I'll give you that. You took the story-twisting thing to a whole new level.

I admit that it is a bit funny, but there is just something in it that's missing. Which is probably why the humor of the story didn't mix with the sudden drama, thus making it a bit "suckish"
AWhimsicalLaugh chapter 4 . 3/10/2010
Like I always say, if your ashamed to be caught doing something, don't do it. That was a kinda sad story though, I wanted ryoma to find out atobe was cheating on him but I also wanted atobe to realize that he didn't love tezuka as much as he loved ryoma. I wish they could have worked it out but, I'm glad it didn't I don't want ryoma with someone who hits him or treats him like that. As for tezuka he got what he deserved he completely betrayed his kohai. And thats what I think but, then again this was just a story and a damn good one I might add. Soo it's definetly going on my favs and it's definetly going to be recommended to friends.
shiroi-chan113 chapter 3 . 8/16/2009
OMFG! this is too embarrasing for words... and i so happened to be reading this as i was babysitting my cousins... (they're taking their naps right now.) and i can't stop laughing! it's so weird! and poor tezuka! and poor ryoma! this must really suck for them...

Shiroi-chan
Megan chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
"'Oh, just be careful Echizen! When you have sex between two men, your chances of getting AIDS is a lot higher!” (True fact) Kawamura said, his face scrunched up in worry. Lines of concerned creased the power-houses forehead."

Great beginning, but the only thing wrong was this sentence. You didn't need to add (True fact) to the story, because not only did it break the story, any emotions the reader had to the story, and the characters' tension and what not, but because this fact is incorrect. You have the same chance of getting HIV/AIDS every time you have sex, not every time you have gay sex.

[Sorry, but that really irritated me. I just took a health class, and they spent a long time telling us what the myths and facts where regarding sex, STDS, and drugs, and I can't stand it when people immediately assume stuff they've read after taking the course]

On the other hand, a good beginning. It took me a minute or two to get into the story: the fact that Atobe and Echizen were a couple didn't kick in. The ending for the chapter seemed funny though, because Tezuka, I felt, was out of character.
HiDiNgFrOmYoU chapter 4 . 7/22/2009
You have a sick sense of humor but I enjoyed the story.
TheCupcakeMonster chapter 4 . 6/23/2009
Okay you know what.

YOU SUCK

I was totally waiting for a giant fight with Atobe and Ryoma where they would knock each other out then have sex and forgive each other and Atobe would never cheat again.

but no

you have to go and make Ryoma STRAIGHT

well, I totally wasn't expecting that XD

I read this in, what, thirty minutes, at 1 in the morning. THE IRONY

this is insane. Who would do that to a 13 year old boy? SERIOUSLY! THAT'S MESSED UP!

and everyone they saw was just like, "oh yes, a thirteen year boy hypnotized as a baby as some punishment because he was being naughty. oh yes, I've seen that before. Carry on!" I would be like CALL THE FUCKING COPS, YOU FREAKO!

but alas, I am eccentric
TheCupcakeMonster chapter 3 . 6/23/2009
I'm...going...to...shoot...you...

THIS is clearly the strangest thing I've read EVER

and yet...I must read more

Okay, first of all, Atobe needs to check into an insane asylum. FAST. Because if he gets anymore little boys, well, I think there's going to be a problem

and after all he made Ryoma do, HE STILL CHEATS ON HIM

THIS IS TERRIBLE :(

stupid Atobe...
TheCupcakeMonster chapter 2 . 6/23/2009
HOLY FUCKING MOTHER OF GOD

I CAN'T BREATHE.

that was...the strangest thing I have ever read in my entire life...

I have to go lie down...
TheCupcakeMonster chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
GASP! Atobe can't do that! -.- I like Ryoma...screw that, I'll go get him myself!

GR! D:

it was still deliciously, shamefully, hot..

I'm such a sadist
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