Reviews for Dear Lara |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am really loving this.. I look forward to Lara and Harry's time together :). Looking forward to more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRIT PICKER ALERT: Lara Croft and Petunia Dursley are both British, and would not use the very American term "Diaper". The term we of pretty much all Commonwealth Countries use the term "Nappy". It's an easy mistake to make, but does not detract from what's set to be a fantastic story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a freakin' awesome, awesome, AWESOME story! Pleeeease continue it? It's brilliant XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to reading what happens next in your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 13 ahh good meeting in the common room and what a shock for Hermione Chapter 14 ahh nice Harry trained Hermy and wow Dumbledore is really full of Bullshit Chapter 15 nice start into the Summer :) Chapter 16 hehe he spewed over Malfoy...nice one and I hope to see more of this nice fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 10 nice of Harry inviting Hermione over to dinner with her parents. Chapter 11 hmm interesting scene between Harry and Snape Chapter 12 ahh nice sweet chapter and the flashback to Potions...rofl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 6 lol funny chapter with that snake :) Chapter 7 looks like the reunion goes well. Chapter 8 rofl...nice first ch in Hogwardts... Chapter 9 hehe nice bit again. I liked how Harry came up with the bullshit about the stone :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! This story is phenomenal! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Harry passing out like that. At least no front page pic. Also no crush by Hermione No cant be the last chapter written so far! I just read all of them in one day! The story is that good. Can't wait for the bonding chapter you spoke of. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow some first week of summer vacation Voldy will have his hands full with this Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love Malfoy in day glow yellow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the fact that Snape and Harry aired things out so to speak. I am glad you explained fuzzy noodles in the end. (still trying to figure out if they are a dumpling or what) Liked the christmas get together as well. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh too right I love the points that Harry made in this chapter! (poor hedgehogs and muddy creation story and all) |
![]() ![]() ![]() One thing sorry for the sleep deprivation that you experienced writing this chapter. Also very well done I figured Harry would get to talk with a snake at some point. Yes I can't wait until he gets to meet Hermoine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Sirius and Remus! Yes I agree that is was best where you left this chapter off. Also loved the obstacle course. The interaction between Harry and Laura was fantastic. |