Reviews for Dear Lara
Luna's Child fanfic chapter 16 . 1/8/2014
This is such an interesting story! Please update it so I can read more. :D
Byakugan789 chapter 11 . 11/11/2013
...not many people can levitate a person and your father was doing it at 15... Seriously? If he was doing it wandlessly maybe, MAYBE, that would be impressive, but considering all of the blatantly impossible and overblown spells you can cast as accidental magic, it still wouldn't be impressive to do it as intentional wandless demonstration of power. Your writing is generally enjoyable, but your logic fails just amaze. Pathetic, powerless talentless Ron Wensleydale could levitate a trolls club out of it's highly impressive grip after failing to cast the spell all day, the club was described as being the size of a man and wood, especially wood hard enough to stand the pressures of being used as a bludgeon is a lot heavier than a man. And he did that at eleven. James was fifteen or sixteen and well known as a particularly strong and talented pureblood.
Byakugan789 chapter 8 . 11/8/2013
This chapter is great if your only goal for the story is comedy, but the match to needle thing was supposed to be introduction to transmutation, both organic to inorganic and associative mnemonics. This thing is similar to this so it's easier to thing of changing it thus.
DarkPirateKing69 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
well, this is certainly new.. might check this out after i'm done with my current readings. even if this hasn't been updated in almost three years. it doesn't make the fic any worse after all.
jjlee3449 chapter 16 . 10/26/2013
i hope that you continue this soon there aren't enough of these stories of this particular crossover and i wish that there were i have read this one like six times and always find something new and fun about it. hope that every thing in your real life is well
poppabear11420 chapter 16 . 10/23/2013
Love the story cannot wait for next chapter
DarkestQueen chapter 3 . 10/18/2013
Ironic how you mention the spelling of Lara - Laura literally two paragraphs from the end its spelt Laura.
Also Lily Potter is spelt Lily not Lilly
Other than that I'm liking the story quite a bit
:) Darkest
Dom380 chapter 16 . 10/7/2013
This was really good! Shame it's been abandoned.
Talon5Krrde chapter 16 . 9/19/2013
More please!

This is really getting interesting!
Katkinkate chapter 10 . 9/17/2013
" "What's New Pussycat" sung by Neil Diamond" originally sung by Tom Jones who may be more likely to be known by British kids.
m4gnesium chapter 10 . 9/13/2013
Did you seriously mix up Neil Diamond and Tom Jones?
Slytherin Studios chapter 16 . 7/3/2013
I love your story, please update soon.
Kutasan chapter 16 . 6/1/2013
and you really fudged the timeline of the music in the last chapter. jesus, there were only a few songs in there that had come out in the same decade, from my memory.
Lazurman chapter 16 . 5/27/2013
And Year 2 begins! Update soon, please!
Lazurman chapter 15 . 5/27/2013
I liked that movie.
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