Reviews for Dear Lara
wolf-in-hell chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Nice start, but i do have a few things to point out. First is that I dont think Lara would have neglected to inquire about Sirius, reguardless of anything else. An second, i think that you should research your firearms a little before adding them into a story. A P-90 is a little big to strapped to someones leg under a dress, as it is a sub-machine gun, not a pistol. If you ment the hand guns she used in the movie, those were H&k USP 45's.
GodessSiri chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Interesting. What would Harry be like raised in the home of Lara Croft? Certainly better prepared for his destiny than he was raised by the Dursleys.

PS - thanks, you note reminded me I also have laundrey to dry
Dnic5 chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
I love it and hope that you update again soon. I also hope that you plan to make this a long fic. I hate it when i just start geting in to a fic when they stop and dont update anymore.
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