Reviews for Battousai's Apprentice
michumichu79 chapter 19 . 6/19
WOW DE VERDAD UNA HISTORIA MUY ORIGINAL Y MAGNIFICA UNA GRAN LASTIMA QUE LLEVE TANTO TIEMPO SIN ACTUALIZAR LO QUE SI ME MOLESTA UN POCO ES QUE NARUTO SEA COMO QUE MUY COMPLASIENTE CON SU SITUACION EN KONOHA. PLISSSSS CONTINUA ES BUENISIMA
Grim24 chapter 16 . 6/6
I hate to agree to konoha but they are right honor will only get you killed in battlefield
Grim24 chapter 15 . 6/6
WHIPPED what a pussy naruto is right now
Guest chapter 19 . 5/15
A nice update
Guest chapter 7 . 5/14
Look I like your story and all, however it seems a bit childish when you have Naruto or another character make petty insults such as; sasugay, suckura or the like. It feels like instead of the apprentice to the legendary battousai talking it's a little kid. Please stop this
Blitzstrahl chapter 4 . 4/10
So every one is wearing their one dimensional cartoon villain hat in this. Then the sheer level of contradictions reaches cheese levels. Japan a nation hundred of millions of people is to "worn out" as a nation so they bow to the commands of of Konoha the equivalent of a Greek city state with at most ten thousand. Because Ninja magic beats swords, but wait samurai can compete out perform Ninja with sword magic...
rhizz17 chapter 19 . 4/8
update please
Guest chapter 19 . 3/2
Cool chapter
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 2/19
Great chapter and plot
Guest chapter 19 . 2/17
A good chapter
Guest chapter 19 . 2/4
A good chapter, and please update again.
Guest chapter 19 . 1/1
A very good chapter, please update again soon
NF15617 chapter 4 . 12/31/2015
This was a good background chapter that answered a lot of questions with regards to Naruto's life before the start of the story. If I had to point out a few flaws they would be the excessive amount of internal thinking that was in the chapter with each character taking up a few paragraphs and coming to the exact same conclusion as the others. This sameness in thoughts could be changed to show some differences between the characters and how they have developed in this version of the series.

Secondly was the scene regarding Naruto's hair, it just felt really out of place when placed into the same chapter with beatings, battles, dismemberment and general violence. I found that it disrupted the flow of the story and I am not really sure if it was trying to be funny or not as the tone was the same as the other content in the chapter.
Guest chapter 19 . 12/9/2015
A fucking good story, please update soon again.
Nate chapter 19 . 10/31/2015
Utter shit.

No thanks.
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