Reviews for Battousai's Apprentice
Guest chapter 19 . 2/12
Please update again
Eien no henko chapter 19 . 10/19/2016
Oooohhh update please
Guest chapter 19 . 9/30/2016
Total awesome update
Bored321 chapter 19 . 9/18/2016
Naruto smokes? Is this a character flaw meant to imply he's got the mental-state of ten-year-old?
Bored321 chapter 18 . 9/18/2016
You cannot have a winner without there a being a loser. Such is basis of competition. Madara was just being a sore loser.
Bored321 chapter 17 . 9/18/2016
Romantic Plot Tumor, how I despise thee. Really, when mentioning Naruto being evil, it's best not to humanize him. 'Cause him lashing isn't really evil, more just him deciding against turning the other cheek.
Bored321 chapter 1 . 9/18/2016
Read this years ago. Remember bits and pieces. The most notable one is the promise Naruto being evil (though it doesn't count for much when the opposition are your copy-pasted bastard!Konoha versions) and it never ended getting delivered due to running out of chapters. It appears that new ones have popped up, so hopefully it's more interesting.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/17/2016
Trash
Guest chapter 4 . 8/17/2016
Immature trash
Guest chapter 2 . 8/17/2016
Your account will soon be removed from this website for being a bitch who suck sasgays small ass pencil dick, just a heads up you punk ass teenager who fails at life and should slit your own through and choke on your own blood and evil naruto never and I mean never train that bitch sasgays queerfuckingfagchiha
michumichu79 chapter 19 . 6/19/2016
WOW DE VERDAD UNA HISTORIA MUY ORIGINAL Y MAGNIFICA UNA GRAN LASTIMA QUE LLEVE TANTO TIEMPO SIN ACTUALIZAR LO QUE SI ME MOLESTA UN POCO ES QUE NARUTO SEA COMO QUE MUY COMPLASIENTE CON SU SITUACION EN KONOHA. PLISSSSS CONTINUA ES BUENISIMA
Grim24 chapter 16 . 6/6/2016
I hate to agree to konoha but they are right honor will only get you killed in battlefield
Grim24 chapter 15 . 6/6/2016
WHIPPED what a pussy naruto is right now
Guest chapter 19 . 5/15/2016
A nice update
Guest chapter 7 . 5/14/2016
Look I like your story and all, however it seems a bit childish when you have Naruto or another character make petty insults such as; sasugay, suckura or the like. It feels like instead of the apprentice to the legendary battousai talking it's a little kid. Please stop this
366 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »