Reviews for She's Not Coming Back
Wolf Kelly 32 chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
Wow! What beautiful words! McManus's passion for Diane was so vivid in the story. I wonder if part of the reason she left was because she loved him so much she honestly didn't want to be happy with him. Or perhaps she was as two-faced as the rest of the convicts. She played with his emotions once too many times.
RoadrunnerGER chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Interesting look at Diane's reasons for not coming back. Nice.

Personally I would like it even better if we would see what McManus is doing and thinking. Showing it all from his POV probably would make the story more active.