Reviews for Wounded
D.R.B chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Loved it.

I was wrapped in the emotional turmoil of the characters right from the very beginning. And the ending left me wanting more, which is always good. Are you planning on continuing this? Maybe in another oneshot, or maybe write a spin off from Diana's pov?

There's not much for me to critique - it was all pretty well constructed. I think my favorite part was the intro, that set the whole story up perfectly. The only thing I'll point out is you missed the word "to" in the two lines

"You didn't really try kill me.

I didn't really try kill you."

Again, great job!