Dude what a hell of a read. Most crazy shit I ever seen. Totally awesome

it's a bit depressing when the author note talks about a chapter 12 that never comes. it's been more than a decade since 2009 and this fic is strong. the banter is beautiful and the characters are silly and intricately fleshed out without being obviously. I will be sad but I will get over it. I hope I find a fic similar to this if only to fill the hole.
a comment for chapter 10. those itachi and kisame flesh puppet spams are kinda annoying. really makes the epic battle a bit pointless..

Isn't Tsunade a bit too OP here? itachi and kisame make sense at least. naruto and sasuke also make sense because of loops and cheating. but there ain't no reason Tsunade is dovakiin

I don't miss sakura-chan anymore. hana is a great tsukkomi replacement

can't believe I'm saying this... I miss sakura-chan

I'll be frank. I'm not a yaoi fan. but I have the most awkward boner for the narusasu pair now. because with the sexy jutsu they can do the gay, het and lesbian trifecta all on their own and it's damn glorious.

Th for the story

The ruby glow lit the corridor faintly, but enough to reveal the smirk under his cowl
"With force, priest. Overwhelming force!"
The jinchuuriki laughed, leaping forward, the ruby balde of the copy of the Raijin no ken in his hand.
... dark temple, check.
Slaughter of holy people, check.
Flashy red blade, check.
Edgy cowl, check.
Destruction of temple, check...
Since when did we start watching the revenge of the sith?

the hell is happening?

actually insane and goes really fucky from the get go and doesnt let off. im pleased to have found this gem

I'm... sorry? You just went out of your way to kill Itachi and Kisame very VERY thoroughly. Very. Throughly.

And then by the end of the chapter they're both alive again? What the hell?

Thank you, this was an amazing story to read. Its a shame it got abandoned but hopefully it gets updated even after all these years.

Like other readers said, there is just something about the story that gives off that really good feeling. The layers of the story, lore, plot and interaction between Naruto and Sasuke were amazing.

God I love this story

wayyyyyyy too much pointless dialogue

It's been years since I've first read this story. Yet it still remains my favorite among fan fiction. I know this will never be updated but I still retain the faint glimmer of hope that someday it will.