Reviews for Black Family
Jayden chapter 5 . 7/27/2017
Awesome story. Can't wait for the next chapter
sora chapter 5 . 12/3/2015
Please update your story its really good.
sweetpumpkin2013 chapter 5 . 3/31/2014
I really like this fic why did you stop updating?
Cersesi chapter 5 . 3/8/2014
I like it.
SilverWhiteDragon chapter 5 . 1/25/2014
okay, i actually really like this fic...too bad there's not more...*sigh*
jil chapter 5 . 4/29/2013
Please update.
Nemesia23 chapter 5 . 3/9/2013
I totally love the Black Family. Cloud & Sephiroth having many children, this was brilliant. I for once, haven't read anything like this before, very original plot.

Love your story, can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your story to us.
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 5 . 3/27/2012
I like it! **
insane devill chapter 5 . 1/28/2012
very good story the lovely love declaration was flawless and very thought out not too sweet and not too rough either completely fitting for two warriors in love.
Shrill Silence chapter 5 . 7/6/2011
Aw ): I'm really depressed you haven't updated in such a long while.

This has very great potential (: It's a little rough to read at times with some weird formatting issues (that almost everyone has, so don't worry about it much) and sometimes you don't have a breaker or something to signal a time lapse - like in an earlier chapter, at first Cloud is barely two months along and then, suddenly, he's five and a half months.

Haha, I apologize for the long review (:

But aside from those tiny flaws every author has at some point in time, I honestly enjoy the storyline of this! Haha, I like that poor/lucky Cloud is a 'baby making machine' for Sephiroth. I'd really like to read where the plot of this will end up (:

I won't get my hopes up too high that you'll update after so long, but I will hope just a wee bit that you'll finish this someday! (:

Shrill Silence
Keiria chapter 5 . 6/24/2011
I'm kind of disappointed that you haven't finished this. It started great and continued to uphold expectations. I'm sorry to see you haven't bothered to update any of your Final Fantasy VIII stories.

That's ok though, the few chapters you've posted have kept me occupied multiple times; that is just how much I like them. Hope life hasn't treated you so poorly and I hope you haven't completely lost the plots.
atanvarnie chapter 5 . 7/11/2010
awww poor cloud having to be pregnat angain is he trying to beat the amount of siblings my friend has theres 8 btw but i love this story theres not really anywords to describe it that i can think of but please contiune.
Shy-Kitsune-B chapter 5 . 3/30/2010
This is really good. Plz update soon!
Dragi chapter 5 . 11/6/2009
oh i love this story i wonder when Tifa will find out Claudia is cloud and i wonder what the other womands in the town will think if they see cloud coming charging at sephiroth with the buster sword that be a sight might even scare all the boys the in the town this story sure got me hooked into it. so interesting and funny and good looking forward for next update :D update soon
Utena-Puchiko-nyu chapter 5 . 7/21/2009
I really like this fic.

I hope that you can continue... eventually.

Kisses from Argentina!
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