Reviews for Sailor Moon: D: The 'M' Version Chapters
N.L. Mars chapter 16 . 9/16/2009
Wow, can I just say that I'm so very impressed?

This story just gets better and better. Seriously, it's impossible to stop reading, it's that good.

I love how all the drama and events seem to flow together. You make it seem natural and believable.

Well done :) :) :)
N.L. Mars chapter 5 . 9/6/2009
This is a very brilliant story. So very dark.

But one issue I find to be annoying is that you sometimes add exclamation marks (!) at the end of sentences where they are not needed. They sort of disrupt the flow of the story, and make it sound like it's being narrated by an excited teenage girl.

But apart from that, this story is well written, and is very interesting.

Well done.
Stephen Adezio chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Finally, someone who doesn't kill Jupiter first. I do feel sorry for Mercury, though. Never had a chance. I am intrigued as to when the crossover with your Love Hina story will happen (loving it, by the way. Even Akane Tendo shows sincere remorse for her actions) Keep treating Naru like crap!
Dutchman chapter 25 . 6/2/2008
The war is apparently over, but the survivors face an undcertain future. Hopefully there will be a sequel.
Dutchman chapter 23 . 5/29/2008
Four down and no messy bodies to deal with (unless you count a couple piles of well chewed bones). Waiting to see what you have in store for the survivors. Nuclear vaporization is quick and easy but what fun is that for us readers? Don't the youma and their demon allies deserve a little revenge too?
NoBarbieDoll chapter 22 . 5/25/2008
Cool story so far. Seems like Sailor Mars is toast, but Sailor Jupiter is back so 3 against the world. Will any survive?
Dutchman chapter 19 . 5/23/2008
Aw - no feast for the bugs. Poor things. Youma ash is not nearly as tasty as sailor scout.

Many interesting twists so far. Looks like the scouts may be getting their act together. The have a chance with the demons and youmas gone to take down the Yazuka and mend their relations with the police, possibly avoiding extinction.

Each person gets only so much luck. The three remaining scouts are running quite low.
Yankee Bard chapter 11 . 5/2/2008
The team at the shrine now knows what happened to 3 of the girls but remain blissfully unaware of Yazuka plans. Yazuka vs Bazooka should make an interesting fight. Usagi got lucky on her first trick. Is it possible she is starting to enjoy her new job?
Sailor-serenity14 chapter 3 . 5/1/2008
Oh shitt another rapenes. lol.
Sailor-serenity14 chapter 2 . 5/1/2008
Where the hell is Mamoru at?
Sailor-serenity14 chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
Aww poor Usagi! :[
Yankee Bard chapter 8 . 5/1/2008
So Jupiter's not dead but is probably out of the game for the forseeable future, and the bad guys know where she is to finish her off if necessary. Plus with the tracking device as soon as the Shelby starts again the Yazuka will have a lock on Usagi and Minako. Agree with your story description - sailor scouts are and endangered species. A wild ride coming on the path to extinction.
Yankee Bard chapter 7 . 4/30/2008
Quite the journey to the dark side. Serena raped and her locket lost. Jupiter dead from a bullet to the head. Mercury just a few well picked bones after the demon feast. Usagi and Minako apparently turned into lesbians. At least they'll be happy until they meet their ultimate fate. Wondering what's in store for Mars and those annoying animals...
Dutchman chapter 6 . 4/26/2008
Poor Usagi is certainly getting an education.
Dutchman chapter 5 . 4/26/2008
The demon's Mercury feast is certainly an effective way to dispose of a Sailor Scout. Will her end be known before others meet the same fate?