|Reviews for Moving on|
| lamia-amo chapter 5 . 4/20/2008
This plot has been used a hundred of times...but I like the way you are prestenting this one. I havent really read one like this before...and I like it...please review soon!
| MoosesAndMeeses chapter 4 . 4/19/2008
i know i already reviewed the last chapter and said this but... i think that should should go tot the volturi for help, they would prolly take her in cuz she is immune to powers and she knows a close friend of aro's (carlisle)and then after the baby is born she can be turned into a vampire and then after a while edwards and her accidentally see each other and get back together evvntually...okay it doesnt excalty hav to go like that but u get the gist of the idea
| Kiara Kou Cullen chapter 4 . 4/19/2008
Poor Bella¡ i hate lauren
Update soon )
| JSTEW chapter 4 . 4/19/2008
wow,Charlie is so cold hearted,thats his daughter..what is she going to do?pls update soon.
| Rhen Nightshade chapter 4 . 4/19/2008
Poor Bella. I like the story, though! Does Edward ever come back?
| All.The.Pretty.Corpses chapter 3 . 4/19/2008
OMG! I LOVE it! UpDAtE sOON!
| twilight.equals.love chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
realle good! i hate lauren tho :P.
| MoosesAndMeeses chapter 2 . 4/19/2008
she should go to the volturi that way they might help her. and then she can become a vampire after her baby is born! update soon plz :o)
| Sgurl chapter 2 . 4/18/2008
| Mama A chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
thankyou, i really love this story!
| LM2256 chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
hm intresting, theres so many ways the story can go from here so i'm gonna be waiting to see what path you choose.
| Jacky06 chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
this story seems very good. (: plz post soon.
| Daring.Sorceress.of.the.Dark chapter 1 . 4/18/2008