Reviews for Sour Apple
BabyGhost123 chapter 9 . 2/10
Update soon it's really good and should be kept going ...
Izzy848 chapter 3 . 12/15/2013
Oh my, I almost died laughing. Beyond that your writing style is amazing and put together well! I really enjoy this fic!
gaap237 chapter 9 . 4/11/2013
Please continue! I would love to see other people's reactions to their relationship, particularly Isshin's!
Tomyallen chapter 2 . 2/18/2012
(Tried to stop shaking the bed with her laughter) (and fails)

Okay so now that I have calmed down. Wow great chapter. Nice and steamy. And those last lines...of course that would happen. Like really I should have known.
RattiesGoRawr chapter 7 . 11/17/2011
I love this story so much. It's cute and sexy and Urahara totally reminds me of someone I used to know.
blackhawk68 chapter 9 . 7/9/2011
Wonderful! Your skill at writing astounds me, you know. I'm quite envious. I don't think I'm nearly as good as you.

And please tell me you will be updating this story! I saw that you haven't since '09 and, just so you know, it would sadden me greatly if it's discontinued!
Midnight Essence chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I miss this fic... *crys and prays to the yaoi gods for updates and completion*
Emmxstarlight chapter 4 . 6/18/2010
I swear, this freakin chapter made me cry! XD I'm not kidding, I was half way through it or so, and when they were together on the bridge and it says something about Ichigo noticing Kisuke's hand inching towards his and he freezes, not wanting to ruin anything..

I realized I was just CRYING! XD Like an emotional idiot!

So I thought I'd tell you, ahaha.

I just have gone through something so incredibly similar to this, and it's astounding how well you captured the emotions.

Fantastic job. :)
lemonlimediddies chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
love it:D
God and the Fox chapter 9 . 10/18/2009
Awesome story. I absolutely love this pairing. The smut is great, but I think even more impressive than that is how well you pull off the romance. Adorable.
Loki Zentra chapter 9 . 9/7/2009
ok, so i found this on livejournal, and fell in love instantly! you're such a good writer! I love the way you make this pairing so fluffy :p please continue!
enchanted nightingale chapter 3 . 8/15/2009
That was so much fun! I can picture Urahara doing just that! :P

And when he got caught by Tessai...

I loved this chapter!
Wicked Cheshire chapter 9 . 7/17/2009
I love this story.

You write so well, you've had me hooked since the first paragraph of chapter one!

Please update soon, I'll be waiting with baited breath!
Beautiful Feather chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
I think I might have read this already, like a long time ago. Oh well, I'm gonna re-read it just the same. Really good chapter. And long .
shadowX101 chapter 9 . 6/17/2009
...hm...hot sex and fluff in between...I LOVE IT! but are they living together or not?...im confused...
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