Reviews for Life As It Is
Kuroi Aisu chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
It is good writen, but i don't think Kyo would love a girl other then Tohru,i don't want to flame or something like that,but Tohru accepts Kyo too,because she loves the cat...
Fanfic Shark chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Aw God, how can Hatori love a stranger? He belongs with Mayuko! And Kyo belongs with Tohru! DX OC shouldn't steal Canons away from their soulmates.

Oh, and welcome to my C2: Fruits Basket: HoS. :D
MysticSorceror chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Things I liked:

Some of the teasing is pretty funny

I really like the idea of Shigure being used

Ways to improve:

Add some more description

Work on characterization a little

Balance the verbal with some more nonverbal communication

Really weird

~Myst

Warning; Only read the next part if you can handle brutal honesty

...

..

Things that I didn't like:

There's no development - since these are original characters you really need to describe who they are and what they're doing there

These seem like Mary Sue characters

I'm really surprised that Kyo can submit that quickly

Why was Yuki in the hospital

It's a little weird

The pace is too fast