|Reviews for The Cabin|
| contrarymotion chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
that is a great last line. after a quietly emotional story, a great line. however, my favorite is still "Her back ached from laying in a position that would strain a pretzel" for some reason :)
Great story. The flashbacks worked well and there was really good flow.
| Moo Marie chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Beautiful. The story with her foster father felt *real*. I liked the touch of the well-read books that are classic - books most people have read or at least know the story. They're the books that stand the test of time. I love the conversations that last for hours with very few words said. Those are often some of the best. And she was right, he raised his girl right, too.
| angsty chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Awesome! What a nice backstory! And I love the ending - didn't see that coming at all, either the fish or G aspect!
| CSIvHP11 chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
thats great, no fish, HA! are you going to continue? tis good:)
| Peggiegg chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
What a refreshing story! I love every word.
| bordercollie chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
I love this - can't wait to see more :-)
| cabooklover21 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
No fish in the pond? Bwah! I wasn't expecting that ending!
| fnfnztri chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Haha, well, that's just like Jack's cabin from Stargate. Great story.
| KimCSI chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
That was really good, well done :)
| hinaths chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
The last line is good, you know while reading, that's what i was thinking... the story is good! are you going to continue on? That would be good!
| Sara and gabriella chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
hey this is awsome! hopefully u'll rite more 4 this story..ne ways awsome story!
| ishotsherlock chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
That was such a sweet story, loved it. There was so much i loved about this story, i recently watched "where the red fern grows" and it is a sad story, and i loved the last line(have you watched stargate sg1 recently).
| holly chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Ha What a wonderful story! I loved it and the memories just seemed so right.
| SoS5-16 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
What a beautifully written piece. I loved this, it made me feel ok that Sara is gone (for a while), heck I even felt peaceful reading it, show me on the map when I can find that cabin. I loved the last line about the no fish in the pond - priceless!
| SARA SIDLE GRISSOM 09 chapter 1 . 4/18/2008