This was a masterpiece. I loved every minute of it. Thank you for taking me away :)

This chapter is so hard. The betrayal of Marcus is so painful. Necessary but difficult. I weep with Sarah everytime and I know its coming unlike the chars. Burned that bridge and salted the earth afterwards.

This chapter is so damn good. Jareth in his element fighting hard with all of the labyrinth working to help him. I love the depiction of everytime a path appears or his strength holds fast against the evil. So so so damn good and its what brings me back to reread time and again.

I feel immensely grateful to have discovered this story, and lucky to have found it completed. I don't think I could have beared the agony of waiting between chapters as they were written (oh but I would have). I have read quite a few Labyrinth fics but I must say this is my favourite. It really drew me and my emotions in, and in particular the scene at the end where Jareth sends Sarah back nearly broke me! Thank you for this story and sharing it with the world.

Great story! The hunger of those two for each other is disturbingly beautiful! Sigh!

Really enjoyed this!

Okkkk we got the first (out of many, I hope) Sareth kiss okok :D. And also, I am curious to know if you watched the movie Phenomena, another one of Jennifer Connelly's earlier films. In it, she can communicate with bugs. So her little scarab beetle reminded me of that! Especially since the Labyrinth didn't have any bug characters save for the worm, I wouldn't be surprised if you gathered a scrap of inspiration from Phenomena for Sarah's little friend.

I enjoyed this story, especially the naughty parts.

However...I disliked that Jareth was rough and rude with the nice jinn...who saved his life. He didn't even say sorry, nor thank him.

Beautiful conclusion. What a wonderful few hours I've had today, thankyou for such an enchanting story.

Good gracious what a climax erm yes in more than a few ways...but wait I'm still a bit concerned about Marcus and Toby...

Nooooooo. So many nos. Terrifying. Gutting and a lot more. I feel like curling up and crying as well.

*splutters* there are almost no words, mind has gone, but there is some gooey puddle by my feet that looks familiar...phew, strange combination of contented ness and heart sickness and just plain sickness at what is still to come...my my just utterly incredible.

That was utterly brilliant, and utterly wretched. Poor Marcus. Poor Sarah. How torn she must feel.

Well that was good of Marcus I suppose. And devastating of Jareth but wholly understandable too. And now she must face things on her own. Gulp.

Oh nooooo. What is he doing? Really hope this isnt how it ends...surely not...eek